Hi,
Loving the series. Looking forward for 3 things, because of the differences.
1. River Song - Who will she be in your version?
2. The Day of the Doctor - the 10th Doctor version - the whole marriage situation and if Rose will remember.
3. The Big Bang - Will Rose go with the Doctor in the Pandorica.
Would also love to see Rose meet other Doctor's, specially the 1st.
pc2tals

I would like to thanks the God of fanfictions authors (who I believe is Neil Gailman but back to the point) for giving them so many ideas to torture their characters!
John Simth and Marion Lewis... I love them 3. UwU

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Is where I skip to the epilogue.
The rest, ain’t worth it.

Skip over 42, for this one.
It’s bad enough the drama-angst.
Just be glad that they Finally get it better!

Skippa from 32 to end of this chapter-a.

The madness of this series.
Be anxious for nothing...

One blessed moment.
Is she related to Cap’n Jack Sparrow?!

Just saying. Nope.
Kill switching might have worked... if, possibly, the Doctor didn’t have ‘something to jump between it and them. Nope. Afterwards, I can see this ‘tribe’, essentially, going to live as a ‘pseudo-crew’ onboard the Tar.
Why? They would need a teacher.

One, the Daleks apparently originate from a break-off human people.
Two, phooey on Ten and Rose not being able to have children. I point back to WhoMe-2!
Three, everything in this is meant to be drama for drama. Not very realistic. Plus, they just push all of the accepted mainstream teachings, anyways.

Just skipped to the end.
Much better to hop past many episodes’ contents.

I skip to the latter point of Chap 12.
Rather jump past the rubbish...

Correctness.
Aka, how to be a mind-controlled, self-absorbed, easily used, ninny.

my dislike of this certain episode,
Did anyone else get the feel of RDJr-Tony Stark, here?
No? Yes? Whazzat?

The toilet technically already existed.
It was the lack of internal plumbing which was (and in some countries, still is) lacking.