The Doctor does have some of Seven's manipulative genius left in him. That would explain a lot, in hindsight. If Rose had been brought to the Valiant and then shot, she wouldn't have been able to come back, but by keeping her 'safe' in her cell, he could hope that with the reversal of time that she would come back to life. So she torments him with her words after she dies, but he still gives out her whereabouts before he goes. Weird, but convenient for the Doctor.
UNIT to the rescue. The Brigadier and Rose are going to have another encounter with each other. I love how the Brigadier saw to her release personally, and escorted her out himself. Very gentlemanly of him to wait outside with her and remind her that she will be happy again.
AWE the Doctor and Rose are united once more. I do like how he sonic-d her face before kissing her, so he wouldn't hurt her. His conversation with Alistair was lovely. Love the bit about Alistair saving the Doctor's world, mainly Rose.

I absolutely loved how The Doctor clocked the Master a good one for all the suffering he put Rose through. Of course if anyone was to survive the Time War, it would be the Master. After all misery loves company, and whats better than watching two old and former friends battle against each other?
The Doctor wielding the gun was a new twist, he wouldn't let Francine kill the Master, but that wouldn't stop him. It would make perfect sense, seeing as the Master had ordered Rose's death by being shot. In the end though its best I suppose that Lucy killed him. Can't have been easy having to be married to him. Tish giving him the watch and rings was a lovely touch, were those Rose's rings, or his own?
Let's go pick up Rose!

He can't go and look for her, and risk the Master killing her, but the small consolation is that she's alive and they can communicate through their bond. Wonder how she knew about Martha's flat being bombed or was that through the bond as well?

While I absolutely hate the Master torturing her to hurt her and the Doctor, not mention just the sick pleasure of doing so, Rose is basically a walking skeleton. It was cruel to make the Doctor and Jack watch as he ordered the guards to shoot her. Poor Doctor, having to deal with his wife death, the pain and empty hollowness of their severed bond.

He can't go and look for her, and risk the Master killing her, but the small consolation is that she's alive and they can communicate through their bond. Wonder how she knew about Martha's flat being bombed or was that through the bond as well?
Poor Rose, all that time tucked away in a cell, with no one by a insane psychopath for company.

The Doctor and co is back, they still have a long way to go. The Master's just insane and hateful enough that he would kill Rose, if the Doctor tried finding her.

Goodness gracious, the Master is one nasty piece of work. Not only is he torturing her, but taking away all of her jewelry, showing off his new wife and the fact that she's wearing Rose's rings. That last bit is just cruel! At least he was kind even to let her aboard the TARDIS when the Battle of Canary Wharf rolled around. That could have been a right mess. It can't be easy for her in the cell. Probably going insane from the isolation and separation from the Doctor.
I'm she still has some faith left in the Doctor, and some of her on fire at the end.

Yep this is bad, very, very bad! Good news though is that he can't get into her mind, thanks to her being Bad Wolf, and being the Doctor's wife. I love that bit you added with the Doctor commandng that she was defended. That was brilliant.

Oh dear the Master's back and he's got Rose. This is so many levels of bad, horrible really. Poor Doctor, he'll be ins such a state by the time he sees her again.

Nine and Ten, especially this Ten are have completely different opinions on physical touch especially around Rose. Rose has done wonders with him, and will continue to do so. Jack's actually given a choice, how novel is that? hehe.

Captain Jack Harkness is back!
I do love that little bit of refection and hindsight. With the exception of Jack, they really should have just left. Well at least Rose didn't give him a Tyler slap for running away from Jack again.
HEHE 'Hands off the Blonde' applies now more than ever now that their married.

I liked the tying of loose ends in this chapter, saying goodbye to Nancy, Andrew and Jamie, showing Billy around the TARDIS and stopping in to say thank you to Sally and Larry. The TARDIS' reaction to the Doctor carry his lady wife over the threshold was fabulous. She totally approves.

Oh Billy Shipton. I did like him and Sally sparrow. I like how Rose was there to get him with the Doctor, makes sense really. So Martha really enjoyed the moon landing huh, nice tidbit. The Doctor's offended that she doesn't actually listen to his brilliance! I do like them as a married and bonded couple. A whole heck of a lot less angst.
Being blonde is pretty awesome at times. "How about you and me go have that drink and let those two stay here and...be married." I knew there was a reason I liked him, besides just being awesome.
"Unless of course, someone refuses to leave or stay human and pesters the pilot until he has absolutely no choice but to love her forever." Yep that's pretty much what she did and she did it brilliantly. Yay they met the 3rd Doctor! That is so many levels of awesome and he knows that he'll be bonded with Rose someday. I do love how Rose calmly points out what they should do and that they need Three's help or at least his TARDIS to do. What novel idea indeed. Yea Ten's not jealous of Three flirting with his wife. Not at all! John and Rose Tyler, oh I do love how that sounds.
I do love how you ended this chapter. Life with Rose, while bumpy and uneven at the beginning is completely worth it.

AWE the Doctor going all domestic for his Rose! *fangirl squeal!* I like how Andrew offered to walk her down the isle and Jamie stood and the Doctor's best man. 'Doctor John Tyler and Rose Tyler - no relation' That was funny. No more John Smith, a tad sad that is, but this is all about a new beginning with his Rose. A new beginning needs a new name, and what better name the last name of his beloved.

Well that explains the mystery of Rose being his 'lady wife'. He got it from Martha, or Martha said it and then again during the transcript. Martha's all sorts of awesome and brilliant now. Always ready to give a kick or slap of sense.

This was absolutely lovely! Now his mind isn't empty anymore.