Reviews for Devil Among Devils |
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![]() ![]() Update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() well letting his girl die and end up in rias peerage for no reason like 80of dxd fanfiction trying to force the canon plot in someway forces me to abandon this as well so much for op issei and peerage that was half aexcution and protection |
![]() ![]() ![]() please continue this story please |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, I just binged this whole story. And lemme say, I am a big fan of this. The only thing that I'm raging over is the fact that you stopped right before the big reveal! That's like cracking your knuckles and the last finger refuses toCrack! So please, at least make the next chapter. That is all I ask. I don't care if it's short. Just have him come in, flex his shit, and yell out "HIPPITY HOPPITY, HELL IS MY PROPERTY!" and I'd be satisfied. |
![]() ![]() Damn this issei seems just as much a little bitch as canon |
![]() ![]() Them being broke is kinda turn off. You would think that a powerfull group has money more than they can spend |
![]() ![]() the fox girl uses her body while dressing up in anime clothes with exposed skin, cleavage, and MC just won't ask for some cash from Azazel... and I doubt she'd go for it of her own accord |
![]() ![]() he's sort of doing work for Azazel and has no money for food... |
![]() ![]() and wouldn't they pick up some cash from the exorcists |
![]() ![]() "..And why did you not inform me or Sona Sitri before entering the city?" and why does she not care about the Fallen not coming to her? Because otherwise need to instantly contact with her brother and then Azazel. |
![]() ![]() idk this whole stuff when one of the strongest devils many of the sly and somewhat evil characters live in poverty where they don't have enough food is outright ridiculous. For example they have that mind-manipulation spell, shapeshifting and hiding abilities. Too much out of character. And if they want to have mundane jobs then that "OP-cook" could've taken on far better payed jobs. I understand you try to do it as funny but then something like that is possibly close to toilet humor. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmmm, seems like the devil is a part timer |
![]() ![]() ![]() me want to read more of this! |
![]() ![]() Ah, yes. A billion OCs right off the bat. Glorious, truly. No reason to keep reading. |