Reviews for Colorful wings and suspended thoughts
NormyMellark99 chapter 9 . 8/17/2013
Such lovely thoughts! Brilliantly written, great job! :)
I want Starbucks chapter 9 . 8/17/2013
I love your story! So sad it's over!
Chasing Silmarils chapter 9 . 8/17/2013
The last chapter! :'(
The berries... poor Foxface. And there's a couple typos or things that got mixed up in the translation ('the' for 'my', leaving out 'my', ect.)
I feel so sorry for Foxface now. That last line was heart-wrenching...
Chasing Silmarils chapter 8 . 8/8/2013
I didn't see any major mistakes. Poor butterfly, that was a sad chapter again. :'(
I want Starbucks chapter 7 . 8/5/2013
O.O IS THE BUTTERFLY DEAD! Beautiful writing as always.
Chasing Silmarils chapter 7 . 8/5/2013
Aww, poor butterfly! :'( Clove has a few issues... maybe a few more than a few.
I want Starbucks chapter 6 . 7/27/2013
Oh Glimmer, that made me think differently of her!
Chasing Silmarils chapter 6 . 7/27/2013
That was pretty. :) I liked it.
Chasing Silmarils chapter 5 . 7/25/2013
That was BEAUTIFUL. Seriously, I'm not kidding. :D
I want Starbucks chapter 5 . 7/25/2013
You are such a beautiful writer! I am so jealous!
Sorceress of Shadows chapter 4 . 7/24/2013
... :) I love this so much. Of all the ones you've done thus far, I like this one the most. I don't even have the words to say how beautiful this is. And I'm glad you're getting more reviews! :D
I want Starbucks chapter 4 . 7/24/2013
Awwwww, your writing is so beautiful!
z1dytd12901z7018273f18y2f31238 chapter 4 . 7/24/2013
All these one shots have been incredibly breathtaking, and I loved how you incorporated the butterfly into each of their perspectives and gave it a different symbolic meaning for each character. One tip might be to merge all these chapters into one because they are really quite short, and could go well together as just one story. And you might get more reviews that way too, as some readers might not review a one paragraph chapter.
I want Starbucks chapter 3 . 7/23/2013
I like the idea of this story. Very unique and different.
Chasing Silmarils chapter 3 . 7/23/2013
This is really sweet. I like it. :D
I think that butterfly in the movie is called a red spotted purple or something. I'm not sure. But it was pretty.
The one about Thresh was touching.
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