Reviews for Rising moon, downing sun
wisedec4u chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Thank for this. I was to read a story from Archie's POV. It was beautifully written as well.
THLadyNightshade chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
Very, very insightful piece about Dacey through Archie's eyes. Love it! His slow acceptance of what is happening between Danny and Lacey and the small victories he takes by having Lacey physically-when he doesn't truly have her heart. Awesome job.
Younger Dr. Grey chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
Gorgeously written, such an amazing POV to choose and I can't even pick out my favorite scenes or images because they all blew me away.
butterdoveluv chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
Great job!
luv4ed chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
kandall44 chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
soooo good! 3 fantastic writing! please write more!
UrbanWitch chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
This is so beautifully written - your language and imagery is like poetry! Eg. " He found himself looking, because from afar, they looked like an entirety."

It was compelling to read a story through Archie's POV. He is such a one dimensional character in the show that no one really cares about him. Describing his inner monologue, his first time meeting Lacey, his conflicted feelings about Danny and what cemented his dislike - excellent! I hope you write more!