|Reviews for It Begins with Frost|
| Zoey chapter 6 . 5/10
How does jack end up alone with Emma?!
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/30
You. Yeah, you. You can't juST TOSS IN ALL THOSE DISNEY REFERERENCES.
Oh wait, you're the author. You can do anything you want. Crap.
Well, here's a lovely poem,
Roses are red,
Violets are blue,(actually they're PURPLE)
I have five fingers, and the middle one's for you. ;)
What, to hardcore? Please don't get offended! I'M SORRY!
Anyways, you can't just toy with my heart like that. I know I'm just A BIT (HA! try four years!) late... but(t)... Constructive criticism! I feel like the beginning went too fast and the middle, section, whatever, is going too slow. This is just a review and I'm giving you the perspective of a reader, (other than yourself) to help you in future stories. I know that many peoples views are different, but(t) I am simply stating MY review... I feel like I didn't need to say that... sorry! Anyways, overall, I believe I am thoroughly enjoying the story! (for now, DUN DUN DUNNNN) I'm only at chapter fourteen, but I believe it will get better! (ha! I seem to believe in a lot of things!)
-Jessie ('Jesse' is how you would spell it if you were a boy. Adding the 'i' makes it into a girls name. They do sound the same... whatever bye!)
| BookyBlueOwl chapter 10 . 3/28
Questions are fun! Here's my answers:
1. ooh tough one, but.. Definitely Bunny. I do really like Jack though. (NOT in a romantic way, more I want to be best friends with him kind of way)
2. I really like all of them for certain reasons, but my least fav is Pitch
3. I don't really ship anything for RotG
4. Least favorite is definitely Jack/Pitch, i think it's called BlackIce? Whatever it's called its disgusting.
Welp, those are my answers, this is a great fic, I love the (sibling) relationship between Jack and his family.
| Passing Stranger chapter 14 . 6/16/2016
Is it referencing as much as copying?
I'm praying to God that something good comes out of this story. So far, it's been a colossal waste of time.
| Passing Stranger chapter 11 . 6/16/2016
Did you just rip off Hocus Pocus? I mean, I knew this story was shitty, but not that shitty
| Guest chapter 21 . 5/13/2016
This was so good I couldn't stop reading omg thank you
| molly122 chapter 10 . 2/5/2016
3. Tooth x North
4. I don't have one
| I heart the Hitachiin twins chapter 4 . 12/23/2015
Haha! Let's play the which one is Hikaru game!
| Naomi the Winchester Sister chapter 21 . 11/30/2015
OMG. My brain is going to fall out. I'm going to start reading the sequal now...
| greekgeekgirlbro chapter 20 . 11/8/2015
Yeah you made me cry. Congrats. Now I look like a weirdo crying in front of my laptop.
| xJesalina chapter 20 . 10/29/2015
lol kinda cliffhanger even tho it's the end xD I wish I could read more... I'll read the sequel soon haha
| xJesalina chapter 16 . 10/29/2015
Awake that's cute the way Jack cried into his younger sisters should I can see every bit of this story going through my mind xD
| xJesalina chapter 14 . 10/29/2015
I no Jack and pitch are bae haha
| xJesalina chapter 10 . 10/29/2015
Lol I feel like answering these question
1. Obviously jack but other than him... Bunnymund
2. Um... Sandy
3. I don't know why... Pitch and Jack xD I no terrible ship but I like them for some reason haha
4. TOOTH AND JACK argh I hate this couple XD their not right for each other lol
And amazing story so far from what I'm reading
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/5/2015
It's 21st not 21th