Wow. Just wow. This fanfiction is so amazingly awesome and great I can't even describe how I'm feeling. Even though Mallard Massacre's music is never described as good they still are my favorite band ever and I would love hearing them play (even though I know it's impossible). Deciding to read this is definitely one of the best choices I've made this year. I love the way you made me smile every time I read one of the band names and song titles.

doesnt tseem like yoru taking this very seriousluy but i havent seen andy of hte MOrtal Instrument movies or anythning yeh so it could just be that aon the plust side of hte dewquitoiny (te one about wherther or not i like this story enought to give you the ol' "Eb. bump" ssas they call it? but yea at least your chaterecterraization is prety good i would bereak it about down as follows.
1 charecters... 10/8
very good! they are good charater in this story so keep doing that...
2. setting- j3/10
like i said idont likne this story that it is based on so ihavente really ogta nat opinion as far as that goes
2. plot 10/9
cery good plot, you know how to write at leats
3. motif 0.10
ther arent any! you forgot to ad a motif so i may not contiune to read this story :/
4. symboslism 10/10
you frequently and eloqeuntly refer to the 'jewish problem' and its one possible solution so at least you have the guys to reall say what u mean, I HOWEVER am not an antisemite to i'm actually giveyoin your 4th rating a Weighted sore * of 4/10 because of the antisemtism
so whenv averaging together all your out of ten scores together that comes to about a 3 out of 5
(that's p. good! xd!) keep up the good work and odn't get discourage because you suck at writing you get better one day like me

This is great!

Your writings are amazing and makes me laugh alot

I'm being totally honest but out of all the mortal instruments fics this is 100% the funniest I love how u made sure to add humor as much as possible since other fan fiction I have read don't include that much it's either very romance or sappy or Neutral(like Switzerland)so thanku for making me laugh so much

Omg phahah she used Switzerland to get out of her brothers got

How did I never notice that the first and last words of the story are both “shit” lolthat should be a dead giveaway that this would be the most hilarious fan fic ever. One of my top faves, easily!

I’m reading this for like a fourth time and realized I don’t think I’ve ever commented! This is seriously top 3 TMI fan fics and by far the funniest one I’ve read. You are so talented as a writer. I absolutely love this version of Clace!

dude...i binged this yesterday and today and i have not laughed this hard in a LONG time im feeling sick and this made me feel so much better. literally. so good. *chefs kiss* perfection.

This is still one of my favourite fics (in any fandom) ever

Clary you sneaky little monster amazing!

The romance is slow, well paced.. I love it. I've favourited it.( Is that a word? Favourited?)

THIS WAS SO GOOD!

This was amazing! I haven't laughed this much through a story in a long time! Thanks!

OMG I died laughing at the Jace going gay thing for Jonathan! That was great! hehe