Here I am, reading this story for the third time. I love this!

This was honestly a wonderful story. It definitely covered the Dom/Sub aspects of BDSM exceedingly well. I have seen very few stories that actually cover those aspects to such an honest extent. So many mix in the sadist and masochist aspects, but site was pure Dom/Sub. Beyond that I absolutely loved how you wrote Harry. I've seen a few pieces where Harry survives on the street but never one like this. The whole wandless magic and his unique uses of said magic were perfect for this version of his character. Of course his excellent knife work and no fucks given attitude were more that I ever expected. This was definitely one of my favorite versions of Harry, even with his traumas.

Ok, so either there is a typo or a massive time skip that wasn't noted. Last I checked it was the fall semester getting close to Christmas/Yule. However that holiday hasn't been mentioned in a bit and the holiday vacation did happen but during the semester. Now however their talking like it's the end of the spring semester when the OWLs and NEWTs are taken. Needless to say I'm very confused. Otherwise the story is still very interesting and I am enjoying it.

There's a rather large error in chapter 19. Fudge says Percy Weasley would be getting a hold of the rest of the Wizengamot for Vernon Dursley's trial. Percy was a fifth year in 1991, which is when this flashback scene is happening.

On another note, please ignore the negative bullshit reviews. Obviously those people are trolls. This is a very interesting story and I have yet to see any of the 'errors' that the last few complained about. Other than some really long paragraphs, there have been few errors and non actually worth mentioning other than this one. I truly looking forward to seeing where this piece goes and am enjoying the story so far.

At burkeleah1992 RE: The Contact

We hate this lying conniving fool who calls herself debstheslythrinsnapefan - amongst her other 1150 IPs or VPNs accounts names and multitude of emails addresses - for trying to highjack fanfiction . nets reviews system to claim "most reviewed work on the website title". Insane and unrealistic as that may seem.

Only about 2000 or so are actual reviews from real people who aren't her or attached to her. Most of those haven't actually read this "story" and only review to join it's faked bandwagon. I know more batshit fanworks manure, drama and attention seekers and seeking most of them.
She's been planning this for almost twenty years - going by oldest IP address - and yes us hackers can easily bypass all the limited securities to view all data's. So 2004 is where "her", them or it's scheme to deceive appears to start. We'd guess the mentally warped and deficient was a teen then being born - or being created as a failed laboratory experiment - between 1988 and 1992.

We - and yes there is a group of us on various media platforms - would never deem to be so low as to ever read this pile of domestic garbage that's been left to rot in the sun. The fake reviews - especially those sickeningly vain self congratulating ones - are a better read that this tripe. My immortal is better coz at least it is funny in parts.

Two other fics played that same fame game of fake accounts to hugely boost review numbers.

Only Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality has actually anywhere near the amounts of real reviews from genuine FF accounts. This really hasn't changed in ten years.

Then 'De Contact(ions) an gains 50K reviews in less than 14 months? Yeah right. Even Putin couldn't make that work!

We even suspect that you burkeleah1992 to be another alt fake as your bio is blank, but your IP and location seems fine, so your probably not another of that demented debstheslythrinsnapefan's alter egos.
So unless 'she' has gotten very clear, we'll take you as being the real deal.
For now anyways.

Because for evil psychos on the net and websites to triumph, all good sane fandom people need to do is not attack them at every corner, ridicule their petty self glorification, irritate them by calling them out and finally bring enough notice to this scam that fanfiction . net staff actually finally notice and delete this sad excuse for a fanwork. The constant plagiarism of older works - either 'her' own works or others sad tales of crap - should be grounds for deletion as it is.
Find us ridiculing this on twitter, Reddit, Tumblr, TikTok and depths of fiction alley private forums.

TL,DR: This is a fake mostly plagiarised story with more than 94% fake or false reviews. Don't be naïve and fall for this lying tragic bitches bullshits!

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love the story

Snape buggering Harry is only slightly better than malfoy buggering Harry.
Both are skill terrible tbh. Unwanted slash should be BANNED here.

I really, reeeeaaaaally hate Dumbledore

I'm confused? Doesn't Severus already know Harry couldn't read before? so why wouldn't Harry not believe sev when he says he was reading something else and not a potions book? What happened to his workbooks and stuff from chapter 7?8? IDK

pretty sure Severus mentioned dementors to Harry in a previous chapter already?

Such a stupid story. You know what would happen if they did that to Dumbledore? Voldemort would kill and torture everyone. Your gay Potter and Snape sucked btw.

Hello thank you very much for story.

This story is very good and i like it very much... allow me to translate it into indonesian and post it on wattpad... thanks

This story was in a word...AWESOME.
One of the best stories featuring Harry/Snape in a Dom/Sub relationship that I've read in a long time.
One of the longest as well.
For all the stories I have reviewed recently, yours by far is the best.
Very enjoyed it.
Thanks for writing it
Can't wait to read more of your stories.
Take care and be safe!

I really enjoyed that chapter.
I like the interaction of Harry training the Twins, something I've never seen.
My imagination was running wildly picturing what the training was like.
You continue to impress me.
Onward I read.
Take care and be safe!