Reviews for Unprepared
Guest chapter 7 . 1/28
Sheik is like the Mary Sue of Sex Slaves.
ladynikkie chapter 10 . 1/20
Hell no don't take out the sex! That's what makes this story hot!
rara chapter 5 . 1/7
You are soooo amazing
Colin chapter 10 . 12/27/2015
OMG THANK YOU SOOOOOOO MUCH FOR MAKING ANOTHER CHAPTER!ive been waiting on this ever since the last chapter and I love this one soo much! Pls make more plssssss
Link chapter 10 . 12/26/2015
Let Ganondorf fuck me MORE!
NarupokeeAurorafan chapter 10 . 12/22/2015
Lol who said no to sex scenes ? I want sex scene especially if it's part of the story ;D . Till next time bye*
Guest chapter 5 . 12/21/2015
well hes not cummimg on the ballroom floor, just for the attention
The Behemoth chapter 9 . 12/21/2015
Also, if I were you I would ignore all of the complaining people are doing about things like the addition of Four Swords Links and whatnot. Those aren't really real criticisms that are relevant to this story...Sorry, I just hate seeing other people give writers bad advice!

Good luck with continuing the story. I really do enjoy it.
The Behemoth chapter 10 . 12/21/2015
Whoa, tough crowd. Who the hell said they wanted less/NO sex? I just want to say that you, as the author, should do whatever you want with your own story.

That said, I enjoyed this chapter. The inclusion of a plot always improves things. I enjoyed seeing Link be sneaky and get into the meeting! The moment where the baddies joked about Ganondorf banging Demise was funny. And I enjoy seeing Link plot with Sheik.

Do what you have the most fun writing. Definitely don't remove the sex up to this point, though! It's all very fun. :)
Yami no Nokutan chapter 10 . 12/21/2015
Less sex? No way! It's perfect, but we can't have less. I am a yaoi lover and I wanted more, lol. I wanted a Link/Ganondorf story. Oh well a Yaoi-lovin' girl can dream, right?
Angelwithbadluck chapter 10 . 12/21/2015
Aww I love it has a story but it was good the way before. Still is a good plot, I am kinda sad that link won't fall in love with Ganon. It was sweet in some wierd way but now stupid Shiek? Had to ruin it. I really like the idea of mpreg for this story. Like if Ganon has a hint of what Link up to, in order to make sure Libk never leaves him. He secretly gets him prego! I so imagine their cute baby, Link's skin tone with red hair and golden eyes. Hahaha A Yaoi gurl Dream! Hey I just realized since its almost Christmas do the evil Guys even have holidays?

Please update soon again! Best story i have seen in a long time. Heck I was super happy when this was updated. But I kinda miss the sexy times haha
Guestu chapter 10 . 12/21/2015
Who the heck wanted less sex? The gratuitous sex was what made this fic IMO . although the increase of plot is very welcome, it should not mean less porn. I'm really happy Link's strong nature is back though! And that he and sheik are working on their escape. Not sure I'm digging the introduction of the four swords though, given that they're in a fic with regular link.. Fics that do that have just never made sense to me.
manda-chanxp chapter 10 . 12/20/2015
This chapter was really good, I look forewords to the next one. I'm a little sad there will be less sex though.
Gay Hetalian Trash chapter 9 . 12/19/2015
Have you considered mpreg?
Guest chapter 9 . 10/16/2015
I do not know where you are going with this but their only seem to be only 3 options for the story
1. Link can finally learn to mind and be loyal to Gannon
2. Link and Shek could escape and fight his way back to a rematch either winning and still loving Gannon or losing again
3. Gannon can get fed up with link disobeying and kill him
4. Continue spinning in circles and not progressing the story till it becomes a shell of what it once was
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