|Reviews for Fault Lines|
| Mary-SueInc chapter 40 . 3/13
Okay, I hate myself for saying this, but your behavior has been unacceptable. Making me absolutely love a fanfic, completely ADORE it, and then you quit on me. It's been a whole month since there was an update, which I suppose could mean that I'm over-reacting just a tad, but when you find something that you just want to continue, and then it STOPS!? Of course, now that I think about it, you could have something going on, in which case this whole comment is invalid, and I hate myself. I've had a bad week myself, and having a stranger screaming at me for not writing a fanfic would probably have me jumping off a bridge, so in that I would be EXTREMELY sorry. But still, if you've just been lazy, I am MAD. And I do mean both ways, because besides being angry, I'm a little nuts. I admit it, I am. I may have tramautized an innocent fanfiction author by screaming at you. Now, this has gone on to full-scale rant at this point, so I'm going to stop before I start insulting the state Wisconsin. Goodbye, I hope you beign writing soon.
| Guest chapter 40 . 3/10
| Mary-Sue chapter 40 . 3/3
You don't honestly expect me to believe that this is the end, do you? It's been a while since you've updated, but honestly! You haven't even killed Voldemort yet! And lets some more sweet beautiful romance between my favorite guy (and possibly a captive in my basement) and a lovely Fem!Harry (and a possible addition to my hitlist.)
| francis89 chapter 39 . 3/1
aaaaaaaand my last review got screwed up in the middle T_T
like I said,horrible "engrish"
I'll just fill in whats missing..sorry...
"I don't remember when I've enjoyed a story this much,the anxiety,"...and so on,just to show I'm not completely illiterate :D
| francis89 chapter 40 . 3/1
first things first,I apologize for my "engrish" in advance; it's not my first language and I swear I need a beta just to post a simple review...or a dictionary...whatever :)
I have been following your story from the beginning and I can honestly tell you that I don't remember when I've enjoyed a story anxiety,the heartache,the pain of loss,the confusion that you are able to project through your characters and the ability to make me feel as if I were right there with them truly makes you a great writer.I have only compliments for this wonderful world you created and hopes that you keep up the great work.
All the best from your big fan from Croatia :D
| Mary-Sue chapter 40 . 2/25
You gonna continue this or what? I know it isn't over, you wouldn't do something so evil to me. Right? You're not the sort of person who thrives off of being cruel to innocent readers everywhere, are you? Because this story is great. I adore Sirius, and for some reason am obssessed with Fem!Harry/Sirius things, so you HAVE to continue writing. For me. Even though you have no idea who I am. So... yeah. Write. Should I say please? Will that help? Well, okay. Please. Don't make me beg, though, got it? Good.
| Grenadine chapter 40 . 2/19
Yes! Yes! Yes! I'm just so glad that this chapter had a more hopeful ending, even if I know better than to expect all rainbows and butterflies from here. Your writing style is so intense that the story is gripping whether the characters are having meetings or fighting Death Eaters. I love it. I can't wait to see more of Leila and Sirius being together, the trip to Bulgaria, and whatever Hermione finds in her research. I do hope there's nothing romantic between Snape and Lily though (*shudder*), but I'll just have to wait and see. Keep up the great work!
| Guest chapter 40 . 2/19
Yes. Finally...omg so happy for them. Please update soon
| Vivid Night chapter 40 . 2/18
Really...? What a cliffy! I cried my eyes out when Blaise died and the knife twisted even more when you wrote that he died calling her name... omg, so many emotions! You are equal parts amazing and evil. This is on top of my favorites list!
| Ewunya chapter 40 . 2/15
Ohmygooood️️ finally! Ah, it's feels like I've been waiting for this since forever! And oh, I really do hope she'll figure out the horcruxes business soon and I can't wait for what you have planned with her meeting with Gellert! :)
| Lizzy B Malfoy chapter 40 . 2/14
Eeeep! So good! I love this James/Leila bond, and Leila's newfound confidence in this plan that hasn't been seen before. I hope it stays. I also hope that Sirius is serious (that's the first time I've actually made that pun myself:P) about Leila this time, and won't back down the second James walks in the room (this goes for Leila as well). I missed Remus, and I'm glad he's back. When will the horcruxes be mentioned? Great story! Update soon please!
| Boo Boo Rox chapter 40 . 2/14
Oh my GOD! Finally they're together ! This is amazing ! What a fantastic chapter! I love your story more and more with each installment ;) Can't wait for the next update! :)
| Serpent91 chapter 40 . 2/13
I hope they can find peace together in a world that is chaos. Knowing them, it won't be that easy. Well written indeed! I liked that piece about Roberts. I just hope he can remain friendly with her, even though she won't go out with him. At least I hope she won't.
Very well written story! I really enjoy your style of writing! It so fluent and smooth in style, even when the contents are chaos and rocky and so emotional. Very well done indeed!
| Anyell.Dya chapter 40 . 2/13
OMG ! is simply spectacular
continues with the fireworks of sirius and leil 3
| DawnScarlet19610 chapter 40 . 2/13
Great chapter! Can't wait for more! Just one thing though, I think you might have mixed up Stan Shunpike with Mundungus Fletcher. Mundungus is a member of the Order, Shunpike is the conductor of the Knight Bus. Anyhow, please update again ASAP! :)