i don't know what to make of this chapter. It left me disgruntled. I mean by how its written, the glass wearing version is supposed to be the version we are reading right? since everything is first person.

She knows the future. And going by how she imteracts with the main characters, one would think she has it altogether, at least there should be no possibility of going legion here.

She is from earth. She knows she reincarnated. She knows which timeline she reincarnated to. Even if we are to assume, its her adult mind fighting with her young brain, she atleast has the self-awareness. Of her existence. Allowing a yamanaka into her brAin, knowing her secret would be laid bare. I understand consultation is necessary incase of dissociative personality disorder. But here in this, the fact that she even has personality disorder is just forcing it.

It is like an idea that was separate. Already existing. But forcefully made into the story. And the casual way it has been done, with no apprehension that a 8 year old is not supposed to have that maturity. It is said multiple personlity disorder can give young or old personas. but she didn't know that. And there was attempt on her part to mask that fact.

which drives my point across, grossly. that the idea forced into a setting that didn't need it. Or at least the hinges of it weren't oiled properly even after the execution.

i don't know how this will affect the story

Should there be a reason to recognize him?

Cool, she and I would get along, I'm homeschooled too. Also swords are amazing! I would love to learn to properly swordfight...

Ahh, the cuteness, it pains me, it's to adorable! (squeals inarticulately) Brothers are the best thing in the universe!

I always am amused when I think of Genma, due to him being Shiranui, tell me I'm not the only Okami player out there that thinks of that.

So your brother is Hayate then? Am I remembering that right?

I like checking on this story every year or so, feels good to ground yourself with the fact that you find joy in something you loved as a kid even as an adult.

Your writing style still captivates me, hope you'll get around to finishing this one day.

holy shit things are heating up, its too close to the end for this.

am i being slow or do we have genderfluid yamato in this story? is it a typo? do we get any details on this?

DID YOU D O!? W H Y ! ?

Rikuto you glorious bastard i could KISS you

bros dying and all he thinks about is "you them yellow flash kids imma kill yo ass" wth

kei still not realizing that "taking rins place" means TAKING RINS PLACE (in obitos heart) is so funny to me.

"mishap with a river" is a gross understatement

nobody names their alters shit like "the dreamer" tf? that bitches name would be something like kevin ong. i speak from experience.