I adore this story

I honestly cannot express how much I adore and love this story. I first found this story years ago and decided to read it again for nostalgia sake. I fell in love with the story all over again! I love Kei as a character and your writing is actually insane ! I really hope u continue to update this story!

Now I shall go read all the spin-off stories

Why is your OC so pessimistic about her own abilities? She seems determined to consider herself average no matter what. First with kenjutsu and now with iryo ninjutsu. Did she even try ?

Hope this gets updated eventually. It’s a pretty fun Fic, even if I’m hoping that Naruto will be able to heal everyone’s injuries
later. I don’t like permanent maiming or disabling occurring to characters I like.

Ay(lagrimas)

Casi...

Ahhh. Poco a poco

Emoción!

Esperaba que Kakashi mostrara interes por ella más adelante en la historia, creo que volveré a leer el Cap 41.

I'm conflicted because I don't mind that things turned out the same. I'm annoyed because the majority of the fic is Kei knowing about the future, panicking, thinking that she'll make plans, and then literally doing nothing. She changes the world in ways just by existing, but doesn't actually do anything herself. It's like you said, she didn't think, just was. It makes me question what the point of the majority of the fic so far was, especially her airways freaking out over her brother when his death is in such a specific situation that likely already won't happen the same and is 20 years in the future. There are many things I enjoy greatly, like Kei's interactions with the crew, family, and people around her. I just wish it wasn't stuck between so much so far pointless content. If Kei tried anything at all to change things and it still ended up this way I'd feel differently. As it is, Kei is just an OC that took Rin's place on the team, with none of the future knowledge or self insert actually being relevant

I know I'm probably yeeears late with this comment, but I totally agree— tuition is expensive and so are books,, I do have a few sites you can get free books from in pdf/epub format (which are absolute lifesavers for the average college/uni student),, but I'm not sure if I'm allowed to post links in comments on this siteOn a completely other note! I'm enjoying this so much and find it quite regretful that I haven't found this earlier. I can't wait to see what Kei does with Isobu and how she'll deal with the tailed beast

Just reread this whole thing, and I gotta say, I still love it. The characters, their development and interaction, the plot ripples, the humor.

Thanks for writing this, and its offshoots.

This story woulda been perfect without hayste

Yessss tsume!

Ptety much what combat medics are.