Reviews for Catch Your Breath
Othaeryn chapter 103 . 3/18/2022
WHEEWWWWWWW alright I have been just CHUGGING along since I started this story like 4 days ago and HOLY. SHIT. I know I’ve read this a few years ago but it wasn’t this far along and I AM SO HAPPY I AM RE-READING THIS DIAIFNDIIAJDHDUENDNSHS.

I LOVED the Kei breakdown arc bc this was a long time coming and her thoughts on not belonging after the events she knew ended are so accurate, like I’ve always thought that would happen to any OC reincarnated into the Naruto-verse. It’s a shame about her bond with Minato thought, he’s one of my favorite characters in the show but definitely not making the right decisions regarding Kei. I’m looking forward to how that all progresses.

That fight with Orochimaru? FUCKING EPIC. I was waiting for a fight scene that nearly killed Kei and boy did you DELIVER *chills*. He totally is going to slither back into existence later I just KNOW it if the whole Horcrux foreshadowing is any indication.

I also am curious to see what comes of Kei’s prophecy regarding the children, very very interesting….

I definitely can see the growth in your writing as things chug along. I’m on 103 rn and have many more still to go but it just gets better and better! Your ability to create original events in this super complicated and very detailed plotline is TOP TIER. Tbh I was re-reading this because I wanted to read the My Hero crossover with Kei but it had been so long since I had read this that I completely forgot who she was written as, but I’m glad I’m back here!

I hope you continue to update this though! While I’m excited for Kei’s adventures in the other universes, I’m suuuuuper invested in this particular plot!

Fantastic writing! Thank you for sharing this story with us!

Angella1012 chapter 1 . 3/5/2022
I forgot how fuckin rude people commenting on this site can be (I usually stick to ao3). Anyways, I've read this so many times over the years and I've left comments before but I just wanted to stress how much I adore this story! Truly a comfort, ngl. Thank you for writing and posting it! Also I admire your courage to still post on this site because holy fuck even half of the self-entitled comments you get would drive me up a wall
Kikidium31 chapter 75 . 3/1/2022
Oh no, this got a little to real for me. Can't wait to see how they deal with this... maybe it can help me..
Kikidium31 chapter 4 . 2/19/2022
When I first read the a/n at the beginning of this book, I was kind of worried. But now four chapters in I'm seeing that this book is actually really well written with a good plot and a good character. Well done chapter 51 . 2/14/2022
Thank you writer for this amazing book, its so intruging and breathtaking that, i keep forgeting to give my thanks to you for this artistic creation.
MissMerKitty chapter 111 . 1/13/2022
I love that Kei just placed a bet in the pool! Actually laughed out loud.
MissMerKitty chapter 91 . 1/12/2022
So I've been reading this for a while now and I think it's my, fifth?, time rereading it. And I just gotta say, I've been reading it this time looking for all the times Kei missed Kakashi's intrest in her and there's so many oh my gosh I love it. You have to be looking for it to notice which makes it all the more glorious.
Guest chapter 55 . 12/18/2021
A mix of 1 and 2
Gatorgoose chapter 126 . 12/7/2021
I am absolutely loving what your setting up here cus I can see it turning into a ninja/Samurai buddy cop adventure family drama when it’s just the two of them where Kei is the jaded ninja who just wants to get the job done and get paid and Yuki is the golden boy cowboy-cop who wants to do everything with honor and I’m just so so excited to see what you do with him, I like him already!
TheDevil'sAvocado chapter 88 . 11/29/2021
I knew it would be genma!
Luthanora chapter 18 . 11/26/2021
ugh, im still loving the story but my god the MC is turning into a self induced head case, she is so self absorbed that she thinks she has to save everyone and everything, at age 9!
Luthanora chapter 13 . 11/26/2021
liking it so far, writting is great - not too sure abnout the MC though, seem's like she will be the typical OC famale MC who is not super strong but strong enough to keep getting into danger and coming out more 'damaged' - guessing that off the fact thats she has already been labeled AND calling herself damaged/cracked wint catatonic nightmares.

I dont understand the facination with mentally damaged MC's, so much of any story is devoted to either them being damaged or getting over it - like here we are 13 chapters - that are not short - and she is 1 year into schooling and some medical training. That's it.

Anyway will keep reading! Liking it soo far! Just hoping it isnt going to be one of the fanficts where the MC needs to suffer insanely to be strong - which makes no fkn sense regardless of how much anime loves it.
TheDevil'sAvocado chapter 35 . 11/15/2021
Note to self: If you listen to a quiet love song (especially the acoustic version of State of Grace), while reading a quiet scene between two characters (especially if the encounter takes place at night), you will start to hallucinate that there is romantic tension between the two (especially if one has been gradually warming up to the other), no matter how platonic their real relationship may be, and it will probably mess with your perception of the characters afterwards (especially if you, because you're stupid like that, continue to listen to the song on repeat for the next dozen chapters or so).
seinanana chapter 125 . 11/6/2021
This is my favorite fanfic so far, thank you so much for writing this masterpiece!
Mortal Book Lover chapter 126 . 10/21/2021
Love this story, thank you!
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