Reviews for Catch Your Breath
konoitami chapter 5 . 7/23/2013
Oh this is really excellent. I'm looking forward to reading and reviewing future chapters.
Eldeweiss chapter 5 . 7/23/2013
Awesome chapter!
I guess this is going to be the start of Kei s' journey of being a shinobi
Eldeweiss
TurtleFeathers chapter 4 . 7/23/2013
Tee-hee, so cute. :D It'll definitely be an interesting relationship between those two.
Gloomydays chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
Dexter's Laboratory reference. lo XD ...So sister to Hayate...hmmm interesting. :)
Eldeweiss chapter 4 . 7/22/2013
Great chapter,
it was lovely that you made Kei Hayates' first word.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter
:D
Eldeweiss
TurtleFeathers chapter 3 . 7/22/2013
Emotionally, at least, it seems our protagonist is far ahead of her peers, even with child-instincts factored into the equation. An advanced emotional/social maturity leads many parents to start their children in school a year early. Her executive function is very advanced as well, even with only a partially developed brain to house her memories in. Because of this enhanced ability to concentrate and reason, that alone will allow her to accelerate academically, not to mention any schooling our protagonist remembers from her previous life. The main disadvantage is the lack of language skills, but she's been immersed in it for years with a baby's biological brain. Anywho, I'm not sure how a ninja academy would deal with that. The manga states early graduation is possible, but how do they do that? Does the child skill grades? Are they assigned an individual instructor? Is there an accelerated program? Perhaps early graduation is as simple as whether or not they can pass the final exam? I also worry about the physical development- a six or eight year old body simply won't have as much strength and stamina as their 12 year old counter parts, nor as much chakra.

Of course, I suppose I have been making the assumption that our character even wants to be a ninja, or will go to the ninja academy. Still, I suspect this sort of phenomenon will occur no matter which kind of school she goes to. Even with childish instincts, adult reasoning ability is bound to leave her bored in wake of a typical school curriculum.

Lolz, pardon my long rant. I seem to enjoy speculating about these things. Anywho, your story is very well written so far, and the development of the younger siblings is a fun twist. I look forward to your next update, and seeing what other characters become weaved into the protagonist's life. :)
WhAt EvA u WaNt My NaMe To Be chapter 3 . 7/22/2013
Aaaah...it's refreshing to see a reincarnation story which doesn't involve the OC being born into one of the main clans. I am really suprised that you picked Hayate Gekko as one of the main characters featured in the story which is why I clicked on the story originally, but the fact that she is the OLDER sibling and that the story is very well written up to now is what kept me here. Good job! Keep it up :)
Eldeweiss chapter 3 . 7/21/2013
Awesome chapter!
Poor Hayate
Eldeweiss
Eldeweiss chapter 2 . 7/21/2013
Awesome story!
Looking forward with what you will do with is
Eldeweiss
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