|Reviews for From the Side Street|
| diana teo chapter 4 . 8/10/2013
Extremely entertained by the back-and-forth e-mails, lol...
Lovely airport hug. :)
The thing I like about your writing is that the dialogue's so organic, it just flows seamlessly and naturally from one response to the next, and voila, they're finally on the same page. FINALLY! You're good, you know that, don't you?
| conservativegirl chapter 4 . 8/6/2013
Awww, sweet! I super love it:) maybe this could happen when she leaves!
Sorry I'm so behind, I'm on vacation with super limited access
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/5/2013
Nice, light hearted and definitely different au story! Keep em coming
| TivaGirl chapter 4 . 8/4/2013
Awwe! Yay for happy Tiva endings! :D haha this was a really great idea! I think it'd be really cool if you wrote more AU stories like this! Anyways great job! Loved this story! :)
| naTIVAlu chapter 4 . 8/4/2013
I'm sorry, did you say something? I couldn't hear you over the sound of my clapping hands...! I absolutely love this! I really wish it were longer, but it's not like I feel something's missing, I just want more :P
The emails were briliant.
I loved how even though one of the things about this fic is that their relationship has grown outside of their work, Tony's job is still what they finally find steady common ground in. She knows what it's like, at least to a certain extent, and that enables her to really be there for him, to really be able to lend him supprt where he needs it, she can be nore than just a listening ear. I do wonder, though, did she quit Mossad when she came to live with him?
Also... purple :D me likes the purple :D very much. As well as the rest of her apartment.
"I need introductions to everything." He waved a hand at the overall space around them.
I can TOTALLY see that.
"He was sweet. But in the end, the interest he invoked in me wasn't enough." Regardless of the murdre thing in season 9, THIS is pretty much exactly how I always saw their relationship; Ray was good to her, but it wasn't enough. He wasn't what she was looking for, he wasn't IT for her, and a part of her always knew it. But she really, really wanted him to be.
"To look Ray up?" "Where does Ray live?" MY GOD Tony can be such an idiot sometimes, can't he? But I love him like that :P and besides that, I really loved everything about that scene of them somehow managing to discuss what they've actually been after all this time. I like how awkward-and-yet-not-exactly it was, and how Ziva pushed it forward, and then the kiss. I thought this scene was very well put-together.
Oh, look! It's a really long review! I think it's been a while... we need to party. How 'bout I'll buy you a cup of tea and draw you a little cat on it? ;)
| never-give-up-hope2 chapter 4 . 8/4/2013
Aw! This is very sweet and cute, I loved it! It was refreshing to have so much said about them in so little words! I'm sad this has ended but I'm looking forward to what else you're going to write! This was amazing!
| M E Wofford chapter 4 . 8/4/2013
I like the ending.
I like happy.
Good story - thanks for sharing with us!
| numb3rs mystery chapter 4 . 8/4/2013
Nice ending to sweet story . Finally they're together and hopefully forever .
| Chrissy1992 chapter 4 . 8/4/2013
Aw...why did it have to end? I love love love this chapter but I don't want this story to end. With all the stuff going on it was a wonderful company. Made me feel like something like that could actually happen on the show. The long distance relationship,the trips to see each other. Looking forward to reading your new story whenever that will be. Thank you for sharing this one with us:-D
| danzingthrulife chapter 4 . 8/4/2013
ohh, i feel all fluffy and nice now *-* such a cute story! what a pity it's already over! but definitely gonna read it again sometime :) great work and again very cute and well-written :))
| Aquasm chapter 4 . 8/3/2013
I did not see the end off this story coming at chapter 4. Loved the story and can not wait to read your next story.
Maybe a sequel?
| prince-bishop chapter 4 . 8/3/2013
| JustGrace13 chapter 4 . 8/3/2013
Yay! :) Wonderful ending/beginning
| mon-petit-pois chapter 4 . 8/3/2013
I was honestly not expecting this to be the last chapter at all. I didn't think the story could be wrapped up in one chapter. But hey, you did it, and let me just say that it turned out really well:) I loved it. A lot. Nice work!
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/3/2013
I really really loved this. I could definitely see this happening in an AU, and you my dear, write very well. My favorite line has to be:
"picked up her bag, kissed her on the cheek, and told her he begged to differ because he seemed to remember having first bumped into her in an alley."
I don't know why, it just gets to me.
Lovely story. Hope to see more from you.