Reviews for Unbroken
MKittyz chapter 10 . 6/11/2014
Please update x3
Can't cait for more !
StarElsie chapter 10 . 6/4/2014
Update!
the white wolf Haruka chapter 10 . 3/17/2014
Please write more I loved this chapter .. can't wait till the next chapter! :) :) :)
michan-natsu chapter 10 . 3/16/2014
I love it. when you update i'ts really good thanks
Guest chapter 10 . 3/16/2014
Yay, new chapter! I hope I helped you a bit with inspiration! Glad you got your groove back;D!
Tabbykatroses chapter 9 . 3/13/2014
How about we make Mikan a little afraid of what she can do? You know have her be really confused about how all this Alice stuff works but never really asking the questions she wants to ask. Instead hides behind a wide smile that doesn't reach her eyes, make her a day dreamer who dreams are more nightmare than dream. Let her true feelings slip now and again, with a gasp or a frightened stare or flinching away from contact. Do I sound creepy making these depressing suggestions? Also bring Kyo in again as a crony or a full on bad guy doesn't matter which
michan-natsu chapter 9 . 3/13/2014
I would like at some point kyo, manages to find Mikan.
And Mikan this in front of everyone so they notice her reaction, and somehow Kyo manages to back hurt Mikan and others learn and all her past
mystery555 chapter 9 . 3/13/2014
I really suck at coming with ideas sorry :(
PaperMelodies chapter 1 . 2/18/2014
Great so far, but you know that Gakuen means Academy? So you really don't need to say 'Gakuen Alice Academy'. Just Gakuen Alice or Alice Academy.

Noticed that you haven't updated in a while; I hope you didn't abandon this story. Anyways, I think I should read ahead now. Thanks for publishing this story!

-Paper Melodies
MidnightCat2000 chapter 8 . 12/1/2013
Really Good Update soon!
michan-natsu chapter 8 . 11/30/2013
NOOOOOOOOOOOO, you can't stop there. I love it. Please update soon
RAINBOW dewdrops chapter 8 . 11/30/2013
PLSSSS UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOONNNN! LOVE UR WRITING. :)
Millenium Snow chapter 8 . 11/29/2013
Did she use her steal alice? O.o woahhh
the white wolf Haruka chapter 8 . 11/29/2013
Please write more I love it so far :)
AnimeMango chapter 8 . 11/29/2013
Omg! So fricking amazing!
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