|Reviews for Unbroken|
| MoonaMej chapter 10 . 6/11/2014
Please update x3
Can't cait for more !
| StarElsie chapter 10 . 6/4/2014
| the white wolf Haruka chapter 10 . 3/17/2014
Please write more I loved this chapter .. can't wait till the next chapter! :) :) :)
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/16/2014
Yay, new chapter! I hope I helped you a bit with inspiration! Glad you got your groove back;D!
| Tabbykatroses chapter 9 . 3/13/2014
How about we make Mikan a little afraid of what she can do? You know have her be really confused about how all this Alice stuff works but never really asking the questions she wants to ask. Instead hides behind a wide smile that doesn't reach her eyes, make her a day dreamer who dreams are more nightmare than dream. Let her true feelings slip now and again, with a gasp or a frightened stare or flinching away from contact. Do I sound creepy making these depressing suggestions? Also bring Kyo in again as a crony or a full on bad guy doesn't matter which
| mystery555 chapter 9 . 3/13/2014
I really suck at coming with ideas sorry :(
| PaperMelodies chapter 1 . 2/18/2014
Great so far, but you know that Gakuen means Academy? So you really don't need to say 'Gakuen Alice Academy'. Just Gakuen Alice or Alice Academy.
Noticed that you haven't updated in a while; I hope you didn't abandon this story. Anyways, I think I should read ahead now. Thanks for publishing this story!
| PassionofNoir chapter 8 . 12/1/2013
Really Good Update soon!
| RAINBOW dewdrops chapter 8 . 11/30/2013
PLSSSS UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOONNNN! LOVE UR WRITING. :)
| Millenium Snow chapter 8 . 11/29/2013
Did she use her steal alice? O.o woahhh
| the white wolf Haruka chapter 8 . 11/29/2013
Please write more I love it so far :)
| AnimeMango chapter 8 . 11/29/2013
Omg! So fricking amazing!