|Reviews for A Small Change Equals A Big Outcome|
| Guess chapter 3 . 9/18/2013
Nice idea! PLEASE CONTINUE!
Here's a grammar error I found, just thought you'd want to know: The Prefect cleared Passsssword his throat. "?" The snake hissed.
Shouldn't it be: The Prefect cleared his throat. "Passsssword?" The snake hissed.
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/19/2013
And the plot thickens. Continue the story I want to see a boy who isn't completely biased in everything.
| Uticadanno chapter 3 . 7/31/2013
Good work so far!
Too bad that Hermione had to die. I'd imagine that with both Harry and Sarah being orphans they'd get into a relationship sooner rather than latter, and be pretty "touchy feely" as well.
It'll be interesting to see where you take things.
| geetac chapter 2 . 7/22/2013
I like the chapter
| InvisibleAuthor89 chapter 2 . 7/22/2013
Very nice story so far, I like the change in things making Harry a Slytherin, Dumbledore and Weasley bashing galore :) You whould make it so that Sarah isn't a mugglborn that way she fits in well with the Slytherins and Harry. Keep up the good work :)
| FaleronDrace chapter 2 . 7/22/2013
Interessting story so far.
For a better reading flow, you should use more breaks.
| rmiser1994 chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
That was an interesting start .