I don’t like that you killed dreadwing off in this

good story

optimus, Optimus, OPTIMUS.
unicron?
(shakes head in a no fashion) no i am not unicron but i may look like him, i am nothing like him, for i am kristonal prime, the last of the thirteen primes.
kristonal?
yes.
how is it you speak to me now? am i offline?
no you are not yet the reason i wish to speak with you is urgent, this is what i have to say you must listen carefully or all will be lost, only a prime can defeat unicron, and now only two remain.
me and you?
correct, yet i am unable to face my old foe again due to me protecting cybertron as i orbit around it as it's moon.
your one cybertron's two moon's?
yes i am i am also called interstellar.

Why did you kill Airachnid off so ruthlessly.

I just finished binge reading this series, please continue it. it's one of the most awesome things I read on this site!
I almost feel bad for the DJD there's no way they can even remotely comprehend how completely totally and absolutely screwed they are. and before someone thanks I don't know what I'm talking about, I have read the comics. I know how bad these guys are but I'm saying a pissed-off Mico is worse. March, much worse...

Please continue this series?

D: Oh damn, just when I thought things couldn't get anyworse!

Huh, so you gave up on RID after only 4 episodes? Was that after they brought Prime back?

I never got into that series tbh, saw a couple of preview clips and immediately thought "Nope."

So, the DJD, I'm guessing we'll be seeing them soon?

Sorry to hear life still has you by the nads dude.

Great chapter, I look forward to next update.

Finally, someone who hates RID as much as I do. I'm not alone! Prime forever!

yep...shtacko just got real.

This chapter was quite packed. It does a lot, even though not much time has passed within this particular part of the story. Good balance of both the serious and the fun. ;)

Nice introduction of the DJD, as well as Elita-1 and her crew. Makes me eager to see how things will progress in the next story, considering everything that we've discussed.

The way you have Kalilah fill us in on the DJD, it does a decent amount of both telling and showing at the same time. We're told that the DJD are a big deal, and we're shown at the same time how much of an effect they have on people. I wonder, though, will the line up be the same as I've told you from IDW, or will it be a completely new line-up that you make up?

The scene where Optimus and Elita-1 formally reunite is done well, although a bit short. However, that can be excused, as they had a lot to dish out right afterwards. Plus, with the new installment in this series coming out, we should have plenty of opportunities to see them interact more.

I have a question. The other Starscream. The one from the alternate Earth. Will he keep his name? Or are you changing his name? If so, I suggest making him Jetfire.

No idea where to begin on this one. From the hilarious highlights of Sierra vs. Vince (my sides still hurt, thankyouverymuch) to the long-overdue return of the female Autobots (80's awesomeness) to the shock inclusion of Strika (very nice, never saw it coming) to the DJD! It's ALL good.

Always a joy to read your work. Keep it up, pal.

This is great \(*o*)/ update, update, update!