Reviews for ELEANOR - a deleted scene from Blood Lines
Tish the Dish chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Awwww...that was so sweet! Truly! Blood Lines is one os my favorites and this was a great addition! I'm such a fan! Now I'm going to read BL again!
Hippogriff-tamer chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Great one shot and awkward since Edward knew her as a human. Good thing the nurse thought she was just talking and not being serious. Look forward to more of your stories
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Awww, that's so sweet :)
hippogriff-tamer chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
That was a sweet story and must have been a huge surprise to Edward! I'm glad that the nurse wasn't suspicious of what she was saying about knowing Edward. Though it was interesting to have a bit of insight into him as a human with mischievous Edward teaching her "When the Saints go Marching In" instead of Mozart and him wearing he looked adorable in them ;0) Thank you for sharing...HT
twi nana chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
oh yes, yes, I did, any more of these little gems laying around?...going to re read Bloodlines now...hugs TN
spockdatabones chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Very nice!
xiolajane chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
Fascinating & well written insight into a young Edward's life. Thanks so much for sharing it with us- I always enjoy your writing.
Bloodlines chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
I read this story a long time ago and still think it is one of the I've read the out take also but enjoyed it just as much the second time, Like I said best story ever!
jdmom29 chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
It's real sweet of Edward to interact with her. We should all treat our elders with such kindness.
amelia chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
that made my night! sweet elanor KNEW him. she may be old but she remembers. lovely edward was so gracious with his sweet friend. he put her first when they could have disappeared. i look forward to being old and a "bit eccentric." hoping edward will visit me as well.

thank you for sharing!
psjenkins chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Resubmitting my review of this story. Don't know how I missed it on Twilighted. I just reread Blood Lines for the 5'th time on that site. It just gets better and better. Anything you write is the standard against which I measure other fan fiction. Just wanted to express my appreciation again. Can't wait for the Keepsake to be completed! Thanks again, Pam
GraceAdieu chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Absolutely lovely, thanks for that :-)
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
That was absolutely adorable. What a wonderful little side-shot you made. It was wonderful seeing the playful side of Edward prior to transformation through Eleanor's eyes. Thank you for this, again, wonderful.
windgirl810 chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Lovely and sweet! Thank you.
rjh1960 chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Thank you so much for posting this. I missed it somehow. I loved Bloodlines, I have reread it numerous times, as I have reread you other stories as well. I miss this story and was so happy to read this outtake. Love, love, love it. Not sure I have ever read a fanfic where Edward bumps into an old neighbor. You were very creative with this. Thanks for sharing your wodnerful writing talent.
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