|Reviews for ELEANOR - a deleted scene from Blood Lines|
| psjenkins chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Resubmitting my review of this story. Don't know how I missed it on Twilighted. I just reread Blood Lines for the 5'th time on that site. It just gets better and better. Anything you write is the standard against which I measure other fan fiction. Just wanted to express my appreciation again. Can't wait for the Keepsake to be completed! Thanks again, Pam
| GraceAdieu chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Absolutely lovely, thanks for that :-)
| ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
That was absolutely adorable. What a wonderful little side-shot you made. It was wonderful seeing the playful side of Edward prior to transformation through Eleanor's eyes. Thank you for this, again, wonderful.
| windgirl810 chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Lovely and sweet! Thank you.
| rjh1960 chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Thank you so much for posting this. I missed it somehow. I loved Bloodlines, I have reread it numerous times, as I have reread you other stories as well. I miss this story and was so happy to read this outtake. Love, love, love it. Not sure I have ever read a fanfic where Edward bumps into an old neighbor. You were very creative with this. Thanks for sharing your wodnerful writing talent.
| Rayday chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
I loved it. This was exactly what my stressed out mind needed tonight. I loved all of the little tidbits about human Edward, Eleanor mentioned. I like the fact he had a bit of a mischievous side to himself when he was younger.
| jerz13 chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Thanks for sharing that. It was really sweet.
| sillyvamp chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
| latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Sweet and touching. Enjoyed it.
| abbyweyr chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Thank you for sharing this here. Eleanor is my grandmother's name so the title caught me attention and then seeing it was a part of Blood Lines was an added treat. Already knowing why Edward wanted to have lunch with Rebecca, his tension is really understandable and well written. Nice that Bella understood why he didn't want to hold her hand. Eleanor's memories were delightful showing such a mischievous human Edward as a boy. Gave Edward some more memories of his human life and parents too at an earlier time than Carlisle could show him. Thanks again.
| Capricorn75 chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Oh my gosh! I never knew this existed- I feel like a bad Blood Lines fan for being unaware of it! Thank you so much for posting and allowing us to revisit my beloved BL Edward. I could feel his trepidation, joy, hesitance, and delight (all rolled up in one) at getting to talk openly, as Edward Masen, to his old friend. I could feel his frustration at now remembering everything she brought up. Now I have to go- I want nothing more than to reread BL. I have a feeling I'm going to stay up way later than my bedtime tonight :-P
| Edward's Eternal chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Close one, Edward. Well handled.
Hmmm. Not such a perfect child were you?
Bella learned a lot this visit.
| alisapay1 chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Nice to see these two again! Thanks for posting it! Mwah!
| CassandraLowery chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
THis is just the sweetest story! I loved it! "Blood Lines" was such an incredible story-I've read it a couple of times now. :)
| BHBabe chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Thank you! I recently re-read Bloodlines. It's one of my all-time favorite stories! This outtake brought back nice memories of that story & made me smile.