Reviews for Before The Next Sunset
multyfangirl18 chapter 7 . 5/20
Well that's going to be a fun family in 300 years when Jack joins as a guardian. Will Bunny recognize him after he becomes Jack Frost? Will Jack spred the knowledge of the call of the pooka so eventually the pooka race will return?
PeterPanfan13 chapter 8 . 4/18
AWESOME STORY! I love the movie Labyrinth and I was woried about this fic. But I loved it! You did a fantastic job on this story!
sjsreader chapter 8 . 3/10
You excel at writing Jack and Bunny stories! I love them so much! I also loved how you followed the labyrinth movie. I used to watch that show all the time as a kid, and it was fun for me to read it when combined with these characters. Great, fantastic, wonderful job! :D
buri chapter 8 . 12/14/2015
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHh! *sneezes loudly on to handkerchief * THIS IS A MASTER PIECE! HOW COME YOUR NOT AN OSCAR WRITER?! I'M SOOOO MOVED! AND I WAS SERIOUSLY SCARED FOR JACK FEW TIMES!

*takes few deed breaths to get hold of myself* Anyway, you're great writer, and I wish to read more of your stories in future!
Sora Tayuya chapter 8 . 11/18/2015
The ears got me. Wasn't expecting that. All in all, a good ending to a good read.
Sora Tayuya chapter 7 . 11/18/2015
I am very pleased Jack succeeded, yet I wonder about this final chapter.
Sora Tayuya chapter 6 . 11/18/2015
I'm glad Bunny made it in time to save him.
Sora Tayuya chapter 5 . 11/18/2015
Ah, so the inclusion of the peach. Still good, and I'm enjoying how Jack has been able to scrape by out of trouble. That bit with the cold water made me a tad nervous, seeing as he could gain his winter powers at anytime.
Sora Tayuya chapter 4 . 11/18/2015
Thanks for noting the gnomes. I haven't gotten around to Gravity Falls yet, and appreciate the outside references if they are from excellent shows/films like that. So far so good: really enjoying the plot connections.
Sora Tayuya chapter 3 . 11/18/2015
I am happy to see some characters from the original Labyrinth show up. That is a good addition.
Sora Tayuya chapter 2 . 11/18/2015
This chapter turned the story into an excellent take on the Labyrinth plot. Very well scripted, very well plotted. Quite enjoyable. Realistic drama, correct characterization of each person.
queenlaur chapter 8 . 8/18/2015
I love it! And such a perfect ending. You have a real gift!
0kiJ9jio80i9j9 chapter 8 . 3/11/2015
Oh my gosh, wow. I finished this all in one day - all of one of an entire day in fact but it was really worth it reading this to the end. This story was simply amazing. I think I love everything about it and it ended on half a bittersweet note because Jack had to leave his family though, but I loved it. I'm glad Mary knew Jack's good though and at least he kept his memory in this AU.. I really did NOT expect the whole Pooka ears and tail thing - I'm just gonna spend a few minutes imagining Jack like that now... oh my gosh..

Anyways, I could ramble on and forever but when I do it gets way too long and I'll just make this short for the better, ahhhh. THIS STORY IS AMAZING, I had to repeat. Lovely and I loved everything. M'kay? Okay. Perfect.
The Demons' Little Shipper chapter 4 . 2/28/2015
Lol I adore Gravity Falls! Loved the gnomes "well let you keep your eyelids" lol wonderful story so far! I adore the slight angst in here, I'm a suckered for getting my heart ripped in two (idk why though I just love angst :D).
MugetsuPipefox chapter 8 . 1/4/2015
Haha I really liked this! Such a cute ending too. And the characters he met on the way were quite fun XD Well done as always!
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