Yamamoto would recognize Yhwach…

Please writer more chapters. This was briliant.

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Over 9000

Best chapter yet

When will this great to be updated

Please make more chapters

Read this ages ago and as soon as I saw it again... Frankly, don't bother. Author's like to complain about flames and how things can be disheartening and yada yada... Let me tell you something, alright? Giving your heart to someone is the ultimate form of trust. For someone to completely and utterly break and betray that (Yoruichi), only for the one betrayed to be all fine and dandy, for the most part, soon after... It genuinely makes me laugh when author's get confused or angry or disheartened by flames and hate after they pull a stunt like that.

I mean, what do you expect when you do something that the VAST majority of people dislike? That is a relationship ERASER. You POTENTIALLY pull something like that when the true pairing is different. Betrayal like that is something no one can ever get over. It's a breach of trust that will never return and only someone who hasn't experienced or witnessed that kind of betrayal might believe otherwise.

So yeah, don't bother with this fic. Really. Author's profile mentions flames and flames pushing writers away. Well, maybe they should stop wasting their talent writing controversial content if they can't handle the heat. Write some non-con or NTR or Cheating or MC acting like a doormat sub that forgives everything for no reason, etc, expect people to dislike that. Add one or more of those randomly after reading tens of thousands of words... I wonder why people dislike my writing?

Good luck.

I'm not in a mood to be humble, so I have to say cringe.

please continue

Holy shit this was one hell of a ride! I was just looking for some fanfiction with some smut in it but gahdamn I never thought I’d be in it for the drama, romance, comedy etc. Please if you do have the time, continue the story! One more chapter would wrap up Ichigo and Yoruichichi’s story quite well.

This Is so good,you are so good at writing
This needs to be finished,this Is One of the best fanfictions i ever read so far

Ciao bro

Buena historia

Nice story love it.

There are punctuation and capitalization errors galore. It's ridiculous.