Reviews for Breaking Comunication
bwolloves chapter 28 . 6/25/2015
This was a beautiful story! I really enjoyed it!
Lol and it seems your story is the only one that has paired black star and patty together. That's how I found it! And it was a great find!
YandereYandere chapter 28 . 7/27/2014
LittleDidYouKnow is Closed chapter 27 . 7/15/2014
Guest chapter 25 . 7/8/2014
So... I don't normally reveiw. Normally, when I get to the end of whatever is written, I'll read the reviews, and then go off and find another story after bookmarking. However, upon seeing this only had 15 (at the time) reviews, I felt the need to reveiw Becuase this story is WORTH more reviews than that.

I'll admit, I'm not fond of OCs. As a matter of fact, I normally try to filter them out, but you've done an amazing job at bringing in yours, like Copper. As far as pairings go, I normally like Tsubaki with Black*Star, but you've done a marvelous job with the pairings as well.

The only thing is that I would go back to some earlier chapters and add more into them, or offer flashbacks in the future. I personally would like to see more 'gurella warfare' tatics with Kid or how Soul became overtaken by the Black Blood. Or have more time at the Evans mansion. Perhaps a scene with Wes, or something. Another thing is why didn't the witch recoginze Blair? Didn't she make Blair for her daughter?
War-Chan767 chapter 15 . 7/1/2014
Well dang that was totally unexpected he better not be in on all of this otherwise there will be some words exchanged with me and Soul. Lord the fireworks are gonna go off if Maka finds out
Guest chapter 26 . 6/29/2014
Omg need new chapter! What happened to soul?!
LittleDidYouKnow is Closed chapter 26 . 6/30/2014
More. Now.
Guest chapter 25 . 6/19/2014
This is really good! Love your idea about putting them back into the book of eibon. Plz continue updating
waytheballbounces chapter 17 . 2/23/2014
Wait, isn't Liz one of the most lustful? I haven't read the manga, but from what I heard, she changed just before Tsubaki and Tsu was almost dead last (just short of Blair).

Anyway, it's interesting that Kami would trap them in the book of Eibon.

And that better not be Soul!
waytheballbounces chapter 15 . 1/30/2014
Soul... Eater... Evans...?
waytheballbounces chapter 13 . 12/29/2013
Oh.. Well this outta be interesting *evil grin* Poor Maka.
Guest chapter 12 . 12/15/2013
That ending...Great storyBTW
TheForlornStar chapter 12 . 12/16/2013
Arm chapter 11 . 12/1/2013
Vry nce fanfic...i lke almost all aspects of it xcept d Black x Patty n Cooper x Tsubaki...luv d part wher Maka learnd to b a weapon as well...
JoeJ1 chapter 10 . 11/23/2013
(o_o) I would love to see more...
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