Reviews for Would be Bluebird by Honeybeemeadows
BZA chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
your writing is fucking remarkable
SDFanFicChic chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
wow...this was utterly dark and intense. Loved it
archy12 chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
Short,but very effective and full of wasted words here!
ceceprincess1217 chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Oh Lord! this is just! wow! wow! I really hate angst though!
CaliGirlMon chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
WOW! Loved it.

Good luck :)
WhatObsession chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
I absolutely love the way this is written.
Erroneous78 chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
Oh holy shit!

Wow. Just wow.

I don't have words. Blew me away.

Wishing you the very best of luck.

Erron xoxo
Maplestyle chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
I'm gutted :( This broke my heart.
nitammi chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
Impressively heartbreaking but morosely hopeful (locating your love through suicide)
all my ancient family members who had loves pass before them have died from broken hearts not suicide. Perhaps they would have suffered less and achieved their goal. I think if you wait too long you miss the boat.
roxiegirl chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Wow. I'm sad. So sad. But damn, that was poetic. Well done!

Good luck!
Meadowlark chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Oh, your words. They made me feel too much and not enough and everything in between. I feel so sad for them, for him, and even though they both died... I still think there's some hope for an hea here, even if it is in the afterlife. Congrats on a beautiful, heart wrenching story. Angst at its best.
Lulabell75 chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Oh, my! Way to harness the angst! Good job!

Lula
Sparkle pony chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
Holy living Jesus! There are no words right now! So good ... Great even. The way your words flowed ... Wow ... Just wow!
Good luck in the contest ... You deserve it if ya win!
TheSaintsMistress chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Holy shit.

That was just... Gah...

Heartbreaking.

So beautifully raw and intensely tragic. I have no words.

Well done!

Xoxo
cristina chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
I loved this story! Thank you!
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