Reviews for Lose the One You Love
Kali-blue chapter 2 . 7/24/2013
Great 2nd chapter. The story about Irv was very real and touching, what a wake up call. Glad they are talking again.

FYI there is a slight error in last paragraph 2nd sentence. It should be either: ... pulled her tightly into a hug Or ...pulled her tight into a hug.

Ciao, Kali
Kali-blue chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Lovely start. I like the off cannon daughter. Not so much the idea of a forgettable man in Andrea's life, but surely he can be replaced... When Miranda begins to woo Andrea with all the skill and passion she's previously invested in Runway or however you choose to move this forward. ;) Kali
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Please say Andy and Miranda get back together. I will personally crawl through my screen and assassinate Michael...or Mike...or whoever the unwanted is if he so much as proposes to Andréa. (Sorry, Mirandy is my OTP also I have a flare for the dramatics) Adrianne is so adorable, and I love how they speak French to eachother :) it's adorable! But...doesn't Adrianne seem a little precocious to you? I mean, she's very Miranda-esque but isn't she also like 5 years old. She has the discourse of...well to be frank, Miranda. Which is adorable and don't get me wrong but she is still a young child...y'know? Anyway, I love this story and hope you continue writing so I can continue reading :) also, if your like to write a couple more French conversations I'm not objected. God, French is super sexy! Especially coming from Miranda
Czallis chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
What an amazing start! Can't wait to see where you take this!
Kthac chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Please tell me they get back together and live happily ever after
cstotts1 chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
Wonderful ! It doesn't look like it will be easy to get them together and I will enjoying seeing how you manage it !
Thank you.
Trudy Rulez chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
After just one chapter, I can only say:
I love it.

Just scared to read the rest (someone's got to die?)
tanama30 chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
i can't wait for more. i love that Adri reviews the book as well and is so precise in her decisions lol. more more more
Poppinswannabe chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Oh that's a wonderful start. Although I always hate it when they're not together. Hopefully things will turn around soon! Plus, an added bonus for already having Irv out of the way! Nice!
Great job and I can't wait for more! Please update soon!
Gun Brooke chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Great first chapter...faking patience waiting for the next one. :-)

Gun Brooke
niktiera chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Oh I like this can't wait until you update again
LondonDday chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
loving it!
Refreshingly Original chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Brilliant job! Just wonderful!
I hope to read more soon.
Ro.
planenutty chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Lovely start. Anxiously awaiting more!
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