|Reviews for What He Couldn't Do|
| Renn chapter 10 . 5/16
This was really cool! I love the way you wrote the drabbles, with both POVS, and it makes me want to re-do the game...thanks for writing and sharing! :)
| waterstar chapter 9 . 1/16/2014
perhaps one day they will make a add-on for this game and you will be able to see how this alternate history worked out. I really hope so
| memories.of.rain chapter 10 . 1/15/2014
THIS IS SUCH AN AMAZING FANFICTION! Good lord, I am blown away with the development of their relationship 3 I would love to see the Future is Hope drabble extended if possible, but I also do like it how it is :) *gives you a plate of cookies and a glass of milk* OUTSTANDING JOB! :D
| nazurath92 chapter 10 . 12/6/2013
Thank you for making this good story keep up the good work:)
| OmniaVanitas chapter 9 . 7/22/2013
Too short! Dang why does this have to be drabble T_T I wish so badly it could be longer! It's just, just like a beginning of everything, and it ended already :((((
Now please, can we develop this "alternative ending" into a bit longer story? xD I know you don't want to commit to this too much at this point, but knowing how good you're capable of making it to be, I honestly HOPE you could give it a try to just expand this ending a little bit more. It's killing me xD
Nevertheless, great job again! Just wish it could be longer (oh I said that already?
| OmniaVanitas chapter 6 . 7/22/2013
Argh, this chapter made my heart ache badly. Knowing the true ending of XIII-2, knowing the fact that all these effort Noel and Serah made, all these hard time they have been going through all ended up meaning nothing, it just pains my heart again and again...
Only if Noel knew what really waiting for them in the future, he should have chosen to spend more time with his loved one. :/
Wonder if you'll write about one of the paradox endings, the one I really like XD (though I forgot the English name of that ending), y'know the one In which Snow revealed Alyssa's scheme before she got a chance to set Serah an Noel up and Serah took off with Snow and left Noel to protect Hope from terrorist attack or assassination. There could be a LOT to write about those two being together XD, and Noel being Hope's bodyguard, what a delicious setting XD. So...? Paradox ending any time soon? XD
| OmniaVanitas chapter 4 . 7/22/2013
Lol! You wouldn't know how much I ship Noel/Hope too! This update of yours made me grin like an idiot :D
What a joyful read! Especially entertaining as a break from my devastating thesis writing. You totally made my day! Great thanks to you!
Noel is my favourite character in XIII series. I hate the fact that we may, as players, have to control Lightning to fight Noel, and possibly pull him down for good with our own hands in Lightning Returns :(((( it already making me hate this new sequel (plus all the dressing Lightning up thing, I mean, what the fuck? XD)
Damn Toriyama, I really dislike the guy if he decides to give Noel such a bad ending. I mean, the whole XIII series is already so fucked up, and he just decided to fuck with Noel even more, the hell? I really feel for Noel, he deserves much better from life!
Not sure what will happen to Hope in the new game, from what we can see so far, I don't feel that the young Hope they revealed could be the real Hope, he might be an AI replica or something like that. Argh, I dunno, while I don't like the idea to fight Noel at all, on the other hand, they made me want to know what really happens to them so badly. Well, sorry for my ranting about the new sequel, I just wanna say you don't know how much I like Noel XD
Can wait to read the rest of drabbles, keep them coming!