Reviews for Stolen Hearts
Guest chapter 22 . 4/22
OK so I've just finished this. Where is the sequel? Please and thank you GA Peach
Guest chapter 17 . 4/6
I would love it more if Dom would be as into and lost in Letty as she is in him. It seems very one sided, like she can't control herslef around him, like her body only responds to him. But he never seems to express the same. Just arrogsnt in how much her body responds to his. Why?
Guest chapter 12 . 4/6
Love your stories. Always! But you could draw out the tension longer. You always have Letty just give in a forgive Dom like two seconds after he applogizes. Why? In this story, he kissed her when he had a half naked skank in his room! Wtf?! How does that show her he wants her or loves her? (it doesn't) why would Letty believe him after that? He doesn't respect her at all.

People will read and love your stories even if Dom and Lettydon't get back together immediately. It would be nice to see Dom have to work a little to win Lettt back (especially after half naked Josie was in his room). Bad enough Letty showed dom how much he owns her by hurting herself...
Shantigal chapter 22 . 3/16
Omgoodness I can't believe it! Is there any more to the story somewhere? Tears :( love it!
Guest chapter 22 . 3/15
Will there ever be a sequel to this story?
Karikocha chapter 22 . 3/2
I'm juuust now finishing this. I went on a little binge with your oneshots and then decided to reread this one. Just realized that I never finished it though.
And oh man that ending! Is there a second part to this? Please there has to be.
Great read, glad I came back to finish the chaps I never got around to before.
Ngwarlli chapter 22 . 2/5
That's a cool interesting twist of a good story,can wait till the next chap.
SunflowersAndHoney chapter 22 . 3/9/2014
Holy. Fuck. NOOOOO! There soooooooooo better be a sequel coming! This story was too good for words!
kmheflin chapter 22 . 3/2/2014
Awesome awesome story hope to see or find the sequel!
krisle chapter 22 . 3/1/2014
good story.
is there goona be sequel cuz i think there should be one.
J chapter 22 . 2/14/2014
just read your story.. couldn't stop reading... good writing

but whyyyyy jaill? whyyy? these poor lovers!
Trini chapter 10 . 2/12/2014
Chapter 10 was awesome! Finally someone called dom on his immature selfish behavior! Go letty! Almost makes up for her being a crazy psychopath a couple chapters ago when she tore up her room and herself over him...

I am glad that he actually said sorry more than once! He should be sorry.
Trini chapter 7 . 2/12/2014
You are SO building up the angst. But it am still confused by Dom's behavior. He says "I wanted to be more than friends, Letty," his voice rumbled across her skin and she shivered. She could feel herself heating up as he came closer to her, the distance between them closed. "I still do-". In WHAT way has be shown her that he wants to be with her? By sleeping around?

And sex is not a substitute for love. I thought Dom was meant to have matured in prison but he seems like a little boy still...
Trini chapter 6 . 2/12/2014
Love where this is going but you are writing Dom like he's a clueless moron early on. I mean, he seems like he's been thinking about letty for two years but then sleeps with two random racer skanks hours after getting home from prison ( basically in front of letty) and then a couple chapters later be can't understand why she's distant from him...?!

Seriously? I don't think dom would be THAT clueless...
Guest chapter 22 . 2/12/2014
I crying right now that was so sad that she was sent to jail
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