|Reviews for The Vestige|
| Oxyrus chapter 5 . 4/30/2016
This story is awesome! I spent hours reading this... and I actually like some of your story including Fang and Lightning Sitting in a Tree universe and The Enforcer. I dont know but when I read your story, its just feel different and I enjoy it hehe. Please continue this story and many other good story you have written so far.. It will be sad if you abandon masterpiece stories...
| wunderwolfer chapter 5 . 12/13/2015
I can't believe it's taken me this long to read this, especially as I'm a FLight freak and I loved your Pacific Rim short. Better late than never. At least it is for me because this story is great and I really enjoyed it.
I assumed (due to a lack of an imagination) that it would be Fang and Lightning piloting together and doing the usual great things like bickering, kicking fal'cie butt and falling in love. But the idea of Fang and Lightning getting closer through drifting with Sera is really clever and interesting. And its really sad that Fang and Lightning are sort of grieving over never being able to co-pilot together. Plus Lightning as Marshal really suits her character (and its kind of...errrr...hot...uh-hum).
I hope you get a chance to continue it.
P.S. I actually beat your non-vomiting record. It was 14 years, then I moved to my new job and that was one of the first thing it gave me - a stomach virus. So feel your pain, and not just in my stomach, but in the loss of something special.
| chadmaako chapter 4 . 11/14/2015
I have to admit, I am very, very impressed with this story. It's well written, the description and the world you've built is incredible. In a very short time (4 chapters thus far) you've managed to get me engaged in most of the characters and the story as a whole. Well done. Very, very well done. Hats of to you, sir.
| FireInLife chapter 2 . 7/17/2015
You...you jerk! How dare you leave Lightning like that! I don't care if you need a dozen deus ex machina's or a 30k word omake, I need to see Fang and Lightning as co-pilots. Make God come down for a visit and heal Light, give Light a mutation for instant healing, hell, make her trip and be 100% again, just do something!
You are just killing me here D:
| denebtenoh chapter 5 . 5/31/2015
ooooh pleeeaseeee! we need some mooore awesomeness!
| denebtenoh chapter 1 . 5/22/2015
Ive always wondered why something so fantastic like this story, gets to have soooo little comments! I think this is one of your best stories ever! guess its just too much of a biase the fact that Lightning is a Marshall in here. Well, - I - adore it.
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/26/2014
Please update this story! I really am looking forward to how Fang and Lightning's love blossoms throughout this intense story. It's really one of my favorite stories on all of fan fiction. Also I just wanted to thank you for writing this incomplete masterpiece in the first place lol
| Your Tomodachi chapter 5 . 9/25/2014
That was a lovely chapter! I'm hoping and praying that Lightning gets to pilot again, if not in this story then maybe as a separate one shot? I mean Vanille could make her a bionic leg right? ;D And the marshal in Pacific Rim pilots again... only to die*cough* :( I guess I just really want to see Lightning back in the con pod... With Fang preferably... Make it happen Raz! ...Please? ;)
| Dorkswag chapter 5 . 9/5/2014
This is hands down the best written story I've ever come across. The characters are developed, the storyline is exciting, and details you put into this story are mind blowing when you think about it. Please keep this story up! I would really love it if it got updated soon. Keep up the great work.
| 18Rox chapter 5 . 7/1/2014
I've been reading this story for awhile now and realized I never reviewed it.
Anyway, I seriously love it! I think mixing FF13 and Pacific Rim is such a great idea. And you're writing is so good! Not sure if it's going to happen, but I'm waiting for Lightning to pilot again :)
| Seeker of the Skies chapter 5 . 5/18/2014
Really nice chapter, I'm really liking this story
| Gcohen chapter 5 . 4/24/2014
Damn, you kicked ass with this combo of Pacific Rim and FFXIII, is just so fucking awesome. I do hope you continue, we are getting to the good part!
| Xianit chapter 5 . 4/21/2014
Great chapter. After a huge battle it's nice to see the aftermath.
The Fang and Light moments were perfect.
Yay, more screen time for Nora! I would love to see Nora counseling Hope.
| ScarletWolfx chapter 5 . 4/15/2014
It was good to see what happens after a fight and see them all follow a routine like cleaning the water and repairing the Eidolons. Nice FangRai moments here and I knew something like more Fal'Cie's arriving would happen but wasn't expecting to see them going to another area, that will be interesting, we'll see other pilots and what type of Eidolons they have :)
| ScarletWolfx chapter 4 . 4/14/2014
Well that certainly was interesting :) it must have taken you a while to plan the fight scenes out? The lava monster reminded me of the one that shot acid. They were all interesting and it was amusing when Lightning went to visit Fang and Serah and made a comment about seeing them naked together XD but they have a set back now with the repairs and everything so lets hope nothing extreme like 3 more show up.