|Reviews for HIVE School|
| Z chapter 2 . 2/23
Fantastic! Plz countinue
| Neo-byzantium chapter 2 . 11/15/2013
It's interesting to see people who we regard as the good guys acting like jerks in this "high school" fic while characters we regard as bad guys acting like well, not good guys per say but normal people who can be jerks too if provoked hard enough but have their nicer sides to them. Jinx isn't perfect and can be unsociable at times but she's at least not being an asshole like Dick's being...
Speaking of which, Dick acted like a jerk to Jinx so I can understand her insulting him back but saying that his family was in hell as part of her insult was pushing it too far. Of course, Jinx isn't the most sociable person in the world and I imagine that Dick and his friends were grating on her nerves for some time so I can understand why she went as far as she did. Dick certainly shouldn't have tried to hit her so she had every right to defend herself.
After reading chapter 1, I figured that Roy would break Jade's heart at some point and I was right, hearing that Jade beat the crap out of him pleases me though, serves him right.
I can't wait for the other HIVE members to show up as high school students. I can imagine Gizmo having his rivalry with Cyborg even here in this fic while Mammoth's well... much like his canon self only he has good reasons to be feuding with Dick and his friends.
To make your story more interesting, I propose that you include Starfire's sister Blackfire in it. She could be antagonistic towards Dick and his friends (even her own sister at times) and become friends with the students who in canon are part of the HIVE.
| XxToxiceXclairageXx chapter 2 . 10/27/2013
This is awesome :D I hope you actually get to finish the story :( hope you update soon :)
| UnderminetheAuthority chapter 2 . 8/4/2013
I love this! I've always thought Dick was, well, a dick, so FUCK YEAH JINX BEAT HIS ASS! And I'm glad that you didn't overly antagonize Raven. I think they'd be good as friends in the future
| anon chapter 2 . 8/3/2013
Kind of hoping Roy would change his womanizing ways for Jade and be a one woman man
| thatgirl chapter 2 . 8/3/2013
Uhh...not that I didn't love the first chapter, but you do know you posted the same one twice...right?
| Thegreeneyes67 chapter 2 . 8/2/2013
Its the same
| anon chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
I like from Jinx's point of view, we don't really see the classism of Superheroes, or how easy being rich makes things called out enough
Is it wrong to steal bread to feed your starving family, a man will become a thief if he becomes hungry enough
However, there are good and bad rich people, good and bad poor people, and good and bad middle class people
A civilized person accuses specific individuals of specific crimes felony and fraud
Without property rights there are no human rights
I love Jade and Roy
I ship Jason with Rose Wilson
I think Grant Wilson is Red X I ship him with Blackfire
| Pickle the chicken chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
Alright, characters are being built up, so far so good. update soon
| Thegreeneyes67 chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
I think the pairing ate what makes the fanfic better so yes, i do think u should have them. This is also a good fanfic so i will be waiting for the nxt chapter. :)