I'm really glad you're going to do four other stories but please let them all meet up again! Oh my god...teenagers! You could do a story where they all end up back in town as teenagers! I know it's a pretty bad idea but...I just want you too keep writing and I just know you would do that so cute!

I don't think you'll ever understand how much I love this. (It's taking a lot to stop me from swearing here, usually I would be but I'm not sure it's appropriate...) I've been raving about it all day, about it's perfection and nawness and the way it's almost killing me inside, and now that I've gotten to the end it's about damn time for me to review.
Where to start...
The style is amazing, brilliantly worded and almost playful in the way you jump from character to character so effortlessly. I find it hard to deal with so many actions and thought processes in the once scene but you've worked it all brilliantly. That shows pure talent on your part; you should be irrefutably proud of yourself.
The chapters are a perfect length and you've captured such a brilliant feel - not only am I super suspicious of Coulson, but I was oh the verge of breaking something when I read 'my daddy gave me ten birthday punches' and every other aspect of your story has given me an equally engaging reaction. I love how you've encorporated things so well (jormungand!) and the little things you hint at, like about how Clint hates (is afraid of?) hospitals and Loki of thunder.
It's the little things like that that I like the most, and your story is basically composed using only little things, and I think that that's really the best thing about it, even out of everything else.
This is perfect to me in every sense. Even if you turned around and had Tony leave forever (which I'm dreading) Loki and Thor returning home, never to be seen again (again, it'll rip my heart out) Bruce not making it out of his house one night after their group suddenly goes their separate ways (don't make me cry) or Clint and Natasha (or just one of them, urgh, you're killing me) caught and dragged off, kicking and screaming, only to have it all start over again for them I don't think I could ever not love this. Every twist and turn seems so real, no matter how terrible, and I'm perfectly happy getting attached now even if everything gets torn to pieces later. Don't you dare spoil anything for me, or else it won't ever feel the same. Part of me hopes for it, all the shit that is surely gonna come down at some point, because if I still love this story afterwards all it will do is prove to me exactly how amazing you are.
And I promise I'll get back to you at the very end off all of this and let you know.

oh thank god clint's okay! haha loved Tony's "made up story" about who Coulson/Clintasha really are lol ;) and then Pepper calling him Phil. his first name is Agent haha! awe 2 weeks :( till the next update i
understand thought looking forward to the next chapter!

These last three updates have, like, stuck my heart in a virtual toaster and just kinda left it there feeling very warm and "so-sweet-like!"...weird as that is to say, but...
I love these chapters! and Coulson kinda scares me, no matter how many times he tries telling the kids he's one of the good guys...it just, no. It doesn't work. Nice try, Coulson, buuuuut no.
Thanks and keep up the fantastic work!

"My dolly is sick," she says without missing a beat, blinking her huge eyes up. "She needs to have 'pendix out, like I did last year. Don't tell," she lowers her voice to a conspiratory whisper, "but the ginger snaps are a treat for when it's done. My mummy bought them for me when I had my 'pendix out, because they match my hair. But it's a surprise, so shh!" The cashier smiles warmly.

"Don't worry, sweetie, I won't tell anyone. Tell your dolly I hope she gets better soon, okay?" Pepper beams.

Best part of this chapter! So cute!

YAY THAT WAS AWESOME! LOVE IT

Two weeks of no updates! :'(
Brilliant chapter as usual, so how many chapters are left now? Oh and i wanted to ask, do you ship Clintasha?
I do hope you do a sequel to this story, it's so awesome it really deserves one!

This was so good! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed but Fanfiction has stopped sending me emails...no idea why so I have to keep coming back to check :)
This was so cute and I will love you forever if you do a follow up! :D

Aww... So cute!

YES YOU SHOULD MAKE A CLINTASHA I LOVE CLINTASHA

I wanna see what happens when Tony needs to leave. That should be interesting. Love your story btw :) You're a great writer!

I'm at work so I don't have time to sign in the chapter was awesome! And pepper is perfect! I love clintasha they are my otp so I can't wait to see what you have planned for them! Update soon :)

LOVE IT AND I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE

noooo don't finish this
never finish this
keep it going forever
its too good to complete

I wish this story would never end