Reviews for The Backwaters |
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![]() ![]() I just...i cant...the feels...oh god im dying here. |
![]() ![]() Is it bad that hating on Justin Hammer is so satisfying? But in a way, isn't it kind of wrong for Thor to be beating him up - the difference between inflicting bodily harm because he insulted your friends and just flat out being a bully is a small one. It would be really interesting to explore the morality of Thor's decision of beating up Hammer next chapter. . (I see parallels with Thor! :D) Totally random side note, but I noticed you read Sherlock too! My reaction was just ERMAGERD I LERV SHERLERK. ERMAGERD YER LERV ERT TER? (ohmygod I love sherlock. ohmygod you love it too?) Anyway, I don't understand why this story doesn't have more reviews! :/ It's an exceptionally well-written, touching story. :) |
![]() ![]() This is one of my favorite chapters so far! I love how you dealt with the issue of misogyny and gender equality and all that deep, deep stuff in such a lighthearted way; again, the fact that kids take it so lightly and see nothing wrong with wearing nail polish only accentuates the deep feels. . I tried to use big words, but bro. feels. all the feels. |
![]() ![]() Ohh, Pepper is so cute.. So sad she's Tont's cousin. But, cousins can love each other right? Because I love your story very much, but there is one thing that disturbs me, and it is the Bruce/Pepper (kind of) thing. Anyway, keep writing and please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for the next chapter this is so cute! |
![]() ![]() WOOHOO GO TONY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS STORY CAN GO FROM ADORABLE AS HELL TO SAD AS FUCK IN .02 SECONDS and I like that keep writing friend |
![]() ![]() ![]() the princeling had taken great pleasure in reminding the bully several times that he was being beaten up by a younger boy in nail polish - loved that This is a cute story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I just love quick updates! Excellent writing once again. I particularly like Pepper in this chapter; she is a perfect, irrepressible mixture of whimsy, innocence and logic which are in keeping with her older incarnation. Her reaction to Tony swearing at Hammer was hilarious, and the eventual reason behind it absolutely endearing. I hope we see more glimpses of this in the future! In terms of the darker tones in this chapter, I think you captured Tony very well, from his displeasure at the summer drawing to a close to his fierce protectiveness of his friends (well, mostly Bruce). I also think your portrayal of Justin Hammer is effective; you've managed to make him just as slimy and odious as he ought to be. No doubt he'll be back to cause more trouble before the summer ends, but in a strange way I'm looking forward to it... Bonus points? Bruce, Thorki's love for Tasha and Thor beating up Ross while wearing nail polish. Like Tony, I can't wait to see what Loki will contribute to the situation (and I also hope Clint isn't too jealous of the kisses Thorki received, but also somehow hope he is...). Keep up the good work! Ciara |
![]() ![]() ![]() BEST FANFIC EVER! really funny. can't wait for next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love how Thor has a point! Especially since he got it with nail polish! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahahaha its Thorki/Natasha i cannot contain the cuteness please more of it! And she kissed them, ahaha! please can we see a moment of weakness for Natasha where Thorki protects her but then shes all badass again after :D On a more serious note...please dont end this story too soon, my lifes gettin so shitty right now but your chapters add this little bit of sugar in my day and i really need it...sorry i dont usually go on about that so ill stop. ...Anyway please update quick and with protective Thorki! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was good. Smart pepper |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'Naw, poor Clint :( I love how you've managed to keep their characters really close to the adult versions - it must be really hard trying to translate it into kid speak. And the references (like Thor's metal mallet) that keep cropping up in random places make me smile every time :D Looking forward to the next chapters (hint, hint...) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was good. Devious. Girls. Haha. Poor Bruce though. |