Really enjoying this story so far, it's a very refreshing take on the kid!Avengers concept. In my opinion, you're doing a commendable job at keeping everyone pretty much in character (which isn't easy considering their ages in this piece!) and blending elements of their adult canon personalities and stories with a very sweet childish innocence (and even a little naivety at times).

So far I love the range of emotions you have brought to this story; certain chapters have had me close to tears, some have had me laughing and some, such as this latest one, have had me both in tears and laughing (I'm a sucker for cute happy Bruce, what can I say?). I'm fond of all of your character portrayals, but I particularly like your take on Thor and Loki's relationship and also your Clint, who is the perfect mixture of sweet, badass and oblivious (I am a little biased towards Clint in general though...).

I look forward to seeing which direction you take the story in next; so far the character and relationship developments have been varied and interesting, so it should be great to see where things go from here. Keep up the great work!

Ciara

I do think they are cute, but. I kinda want to see either Bruce's dad or Tony's uncle/aunt to follow them and like find out or something! OHHHH! Terrorists could attack Tony in the woods and idek. :D

so hilarious and cute! Well, at least Bruce gets a wonderful birthday after all :) thanks for the update!

Yay for Bruce. They are so cute!

That was so cute, please update soon, im having such a crappy week and i really love seeing your updates, it cheers me up, so please...for me? Update soon?

Awww! Bruce is just so darn cute! Tony and Loki are mean though. I love it!

i think pepper nd bruce are adorable

Brilliant, you wrote Natasha really well! I hope you write more of her :)

Haha.

Where did they go though.

Yes. SO MUCH YES. Thorki and Pepperoni and star spangled banner yes. (XD I've actually never heard that one before!) I love how you made them innocent nicknames, though, and not awkotaco ship names - somehow it only makes it sweeter. (:

there's something terribly funny about little kids tossing 'ship names about and completely changing the original intents...ah, the innocence of children :)
also, it was kinda hard hearing Natasha's story, and my heart kinda broke for Barney, although, only like a fracture...like, like a splinter?...or barely at all? um...thanks for the update and keep it up!

This is good, you really rocked that prompt.
Hope you update soon!

Aww. Poor pepper. I feel so bad for Bruce and Clint. Well all of them really.

Omg. I laughed so hard.

They are so cute. Well written.