| Reviews for Faction Five High |
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   hypnotize-the-mind chapter 2 . 7/31/2013 UPDATE! Please, please, please! |
| haley2017 chapter 1 . 7/27/2013 so great story I like chapter 2 also. hey I like how you took the part of the death part from when I said ' my moms mini van is a death trap because the blinkers don't work.' Oh well I guess that doesn't matter. hey the charger was a good idea but a green charger with a neon green stripe. Nickles is the gienus that is the nut head and came up with the ugly car color. sorry crusta that I'm not saying much about you oh well I still luv both of you guys. ttyl see you soon , l LUV, haley2017 ps don't worry bout the spelling mistakes me not the best speller in the world luv you guys! |
| Ave'sBabe2017 chapter 1 . 7/24/2013 Hey. Great start...love how lots of stuff (i.e. gas station) takes place in Yankton. But I think that you should have asked how to upload another chapter just in case you don't know how. There is always that possibilty. (i.e. me :)) So anyways..why the cliffhanger. You said yourself that you didn't like them and got mad at me with my cliffhanger. Once you figure out how to upload a new chapter... shot me a "review." Anyways your story was great! But next time before you upload maybe you should check your spelling. Some parts didn't make sense because you forgot a few words and I had to figure it out myself. Your story was funny though. So remember that. Also remember... Ave's Babe loves you. Bye Sexy! ;) |