|Reviews for Merlin's Anger|
| wesann19dew chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
I LOVE IT! WRITE MORE
| Harper Rose Mitchell chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
TAKE THAT, UTHER!
| me chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
This is cool
| Violentshadow chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
| The Disorganization chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
wow... just wow... so true so awesome...
| Scribbles111 chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
nice, its simple, straight to, and i like it, no idea y, i just like it...its one of them u just do! lool!
| the Goddess of Purple Coats chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
You cocky miscreant, Uther! *laughs* Certainly suits him.
| Codfather chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
| Night Flyer chapter 1 . 7/29/2003
well, i thought it was a very good poem. you did an excellent job of capturing merlin's feelings that night and throughout the first few chapters of the book. i applaude you!
| Stella chapter 1 . 5/12/2003
| amiwakawaiidesu chapter 1 . 10/6/2002
As usual with your writing, a great strength of this piece is emotional intensity.
One specific device that's very effective is the splitting of relatively short sentences into separate lines (e.g., "Can't you see the blood/Pouring from my wounded wrist?"); that device produces an effect suggestive of a speaker who is angry, or hurt, or-at any rate-short of breath. The effect is dramatic and skillfully done.
| Fire Pendant chapter 1 . 9/28/2002
Thnk you soo much for reviewing! My first review. I'm not coming back to Irish Sorry sorry sorry! Please read my other story and e- mail me sometime
| Chronic Daydreamer chapter 1 . 9/22/2002
I liked it, it showed a lot of true emotion that spun itself directly from the book and gives you something to add. Thanks for a good read.
| Lune Luna chapter 1 . 9/21/2002
Very Accurate for the time period it is placed, the wording fits into place, but one thing bothers me.. I cant quite place it though..
| Crystal-Velvet chapter 1 . 9/21/2002