Reviews for Laws of Decay
arlzs chapter 3 . 7/28/2013
A stranger, you say? Hmmm...

So much packed into this little chapter.
arlzs chapter 2 . 7/28/2013
I just read this about five times thinking, 'I'm sure there are important clues!'

I probably need to chill out with that or it's going to take me forever to read these 6k words that you have posted.
designslacker chapter 8 . 7/27/2013
Meaty but lean. Unpredictabilty at its finest. Loving what you're doing here.
designslacker chapter 3 . 7/27/2013
Fabulous charactizations, and a vivid sense of time and place. I'm smitten by your words.
Eduardiana chapter 8 . 7/27/2013
This made me laugh "You'd hear me even if I didn't say it."
"I can block your thoughts. Your drunken ramblings are harder to ignore."

"They're hungry. They're always hungry, and she won't hunt. She just sits there," "Stupid bastard, playing house with his little doll of a wife like she knows where she is, trying to pretend he didn't break her the moment he bit her"

"My last chance. Did I ever have a first? You've taken her from me. Twice." He sighed. "You're always taking her from me." I'm so intrigued about Bella's life before she was changed.

The end of this chapter was shocking. I wasn't expecting that. Will Edward finally get a reaction from Bella when she finds out he killed Jacob? "Kill me, then. She'll never forgive you."

Thank you!
FinnMac chapter 8 . 7/27/2013
Wow, now that was a teaching tool. Good thing you can't talk, Alec.
FinnMac chapter 7 . 7/27/2013
So Bella doesn't like her dinner to scream?
FinnMac chapter 6 . 7/27/2013
When is Alec's story set?
FinnMac chapter 5 . 7/27/2013
Step by step this mystery is being built. So good.
FinnMac chapter 4 . 7/27/2013
Curiouser and curiouser...
FinnMac chapter 3 . 7/27/2013
Great use of characters: canon and new!
FinnMac chapter 2 . 7/27/2013
It's downright rude to eat your potential father-in-law.
FinnMac chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
Beautiful and mysterious first chapter.
bonz245 chapter 8 . 7/27/2013
So good..thanks.
chosmer chapter 8 . 7/27/2013
Edward seems extremely attractive in this story. Physically. I think it's the time period? The Cadillac? I don't know.
I love the direction of this story.
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