Reviews for Clockwork
Yorik chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
becauseambatman1 chapter 1 . 1/20/2016
The definition of agnst/hurt/comfort. Wow i am speachless to what happened, and cant emagine how it happened... You just left it raw for everyone to read. Bravo. BRAVO! TTATT
een nihc chapter 1 . 8/24/2015
You're crazy albeit in a good way, I mean where did you get this idea from? Who was in her hallucination? Sasuke? Please write more, I'd love to see how Naruto would react if he finds out. And I wonder if Kakashi can cast the same genjutsu to himself while staring at the mirror. Wow, I'm sick. LOL
Kakashi Nuttcase chapter 1 . 11/5/2014
I just recently discovered you and it makes me happy (not just because of good sexy fanfic goodness) but because your fics remind me of when I was writing. When I'd get sucked into some wonderful idea that I tapped away at the keys like a robot. However you are a much better writer then I ever was writing fanfiction. I stopped due to some reasons. One being I truly became passionate when the one I loved enjoyed my writing (she is no longer in the picture) and two being Naruto is fading from many fans hearts. And soon the story will be over. I'm terrified to get back into that world for it to end. Naruto was somewhat like family for my young heart. I was always an odd kid and I rarely spoke let alone had an opinion. But my little 5th grade eyes caught this well drawn manga sight called Naruto. I then watched the anime crazed with my fandom obsession. That anime taught me so much whether it be suck it up or don't be afraid to make a friend. It seems silly to put so much on an anime, but at the time I really needed it. I needed anything. The characters became family and to this day I haven't watched pass Asuma's death because he's practically my sensei. (wow I'm a creep) Lol anywho sorry for that life story, your work just makes me flow back into those memories. You're truly an amazing writer and I can see your passion. So please even if you have or plan to stop, don't. You have so much in your work already. I'd hate for the world to not see such an amazing writer in the future.
EWHH its Kenna chapter 1 . 8/17/2014
ephieshine chapter 1 . 8/11/2014
Oh my god. Can I just confess now how much I love you? I read "Even a Blind Pig" first, because it was recommended to me, and I assumed that your fics would be mostly humorous and light-hearted. I did not expect this ... but I fell in love. This is absolutely phenomenal (again!), and you capture the emotions and every nuance perfectly. I just want to give you a huge hug and a huge thank you for this. I'll be devouring the rest of your fics soon. Much love!
Pipra chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
It'll be great if you continue to writing this fic!
DeepPoeticGirl chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
Holy crap. This is kind of amazing in every which way possible? Wow.
vivisect chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
Ohhhhhhh helll YES this is SO good! They're so fucked u it!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
Wow..I didn't expect that...Each line took me by written
Faye-Faye14 chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
This is INCREDIBLE! Poor Kakashi!

I love the mystery that surrounds this little piece! It's perfect! Thank you so much for sharing!
Illusion of the Mirror chapter 1 . 9/22/2013 is he using his Sharingan so in her mind's eye she sees Sasuke or something? That' just have no words.
Good fic.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
This gets better every time i read it. -fw
scipunx chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
The last line is a smack in the face. I love the twist and how it all comes together in the end.
Kagomaru chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
I don't think you NEED to explain how this started, but I would LOVE to know where it goes. If he has control over what she sees, does he give her Sasuke? If so, what would happen if he showed her an image of himself ravishing her? Would she make it real? Would she refuse to forgive him? I want to know! _v
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