|Reviews for Desires|
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/24
This story is so satisfying damn. One of my favourites. A sexy scene for a first chapter, fluff and some angst after. Then Mikasa scene and faint/sick moment for the uke. My goodness. Only 2 chapters and I feel sated. Thank you.
Sated kinda sounds weird. XD
| the.heart.crest chapter 2 . 2/19
an IV doesn't just slip out of the vein!
it hurts like fuck if it does, and usually it's fixated with a bandaid to keep if from slipping out.
also, it's gonna bleed like fuck! it's a vein that's being pierced!
okay... aside from that...
*_* this was UTTERLY BEAUTIFUL!
just so... ah... i love armin... and eren... gah... this is just so ...
i hardly find words for it...
the first chapter was so sweet... that tender shyness... it felt so right reading it as it was...
they seemed like themselves so much...
i guessed armin would freak out easily...
he's so petite and stuff... it came naturally, i think... eren's worries, mikasa ... it all felt as if it could have happened just like that
it was very beautiful, well done!
| Toast chapter 2 . 11/2/2014
That was amazing! You are a very good writer! The length made it even better! Keep up the good work!
| MioTeddy chapter 2 . 10/18/2014
Woah. It went from total smut to heartfelt love to total smut. OoO
| ForeshadowedFate chapter 2 . 9/30/2014
I really like this two-shot, particularly because the main idea behind it is that it's Eren and Armin's first time having sex. I like how in chapter one, it's awkward and very unfamiliar to them, while in chapter two, they now have a better idea of what they're doing and, while no means experts, they're more willing and "aggressive" about it. It's fairly subtle, but also quite obvious in the way that they go about... well, "doing it" in the second chapter when compared to the first, to put it bluntly. The conflict(s) is/are also rather interesting, as I can see Eren not being bothered too much about anyone finding out about him and Armin, but Armin more than likely having a negative reaction to such a thing. All in all, the character interactions, relationship/smut with Eren and Armin, dialogue, conflict and plot all made this very enjoyable to read.
Really, the only criticisms would be on some of your spelling/grammar. It was really good overall, but some words and sentences particularly stuck out at me as misspelled or something similar of the like. Besides those little things, though, as I said before, this was very enjoyable to read! Keep up the great work! :)
| Liz chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
eren x armin otp for life!
| Very happy anon chapter 2 . 7/20/2014
THIS IS THE BEST FANFICTION EVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
| The Lord of Insomnia chapter 2 . 7/3/2014
I've read nearly all of the Ermin stories and this is by far my favourite. I read both chapters top to bottom and it was amazing. If you're still taking requests, could you do a story about someone sneaks alcohol into the camp and a drunk Armin seduces Eren? Maybe an Mpreg consequence in there, too? Anyway, great story! If you could write this for me, I'd be very happy.
| lulu422 chapter 2 . 7/1/2014
Oh my shit! This was AMAZING! It deserves soooooooooo many more likes. I loved it. The amazing descriptions and the way they were all innocent and exploring each other in the first chapter...this is gold. Please continue to make more awesomeness in the future.
-Keep being epic
| Whitesoulninja69 chapter 2 . 6/20/2014
Awesome fanfic! I loved it every single word. This last chapter was really sad and I nearly cried three times, but I'm happy everything's better :)
You should make another Eremin fic. Something that isn't too sad, but maybe a little feelzy sometimes. Kinda like you did in this one, but only you spread out the feelz, not have them all in one section of the fanfic. Im not judging yours saying its bad you did that, actually it was really good. In that situation you portrayed it fantastically.
Keep up the good work :)
| Anon chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
"And for an odd reason, the wound on his neck healed quickly. Quicker than normal..."
| SNKFanGirl chapter 2 . 6/12/2014
Can I has request please if so note me on mai deviantart: Animelova4evs or my Email: it would be greatly appreciated and I could write you a fanfic in return if you want
| Ciel Koalahive chapter 2 . 5/30/2014
| Hana owen chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
I love this! They are so CUTE! 3
| silverheartlugia2000 chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
Ps: though submissiveness around mika or Levi might be apropreateX3 why do most peoe see him as a cat though..