Reviews for Checkmate
Bellatrix567 chapter 2 . 7/29/2013
This is amazingly well written, it's really hard to find something good about Voldemort (outside the humor genre, of course).
libraryloser chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
So excited to be able to review YOUR story! It is really well done. Maybe instead of doing novel type stories, your calling is one or two-shot vignettes like this, that expound characters we don't get to be emotionally familiar with in the stories. Because this one was perfect for Voldemort! Regulus Black, next, anyone?
Guest chapter 2 . 7/25/2013
Good short story.
emarald777 chapter 2 . 7/25/2013
Seems like with each ridiculous baby step, Dumbledore managed to turn his pawn into king itself (which of course should be impossible) but he did it anyway.
Kasamira chapter 2 . 7/24/2013
Brilliant! You took a character who was emotionally distant from us and made us sympathize and draw similarities and contrasts we didn't believe exist between our favorite protagonist. Bloody brilliant! :)