|Reviews for The Illusive Emperor|
| SomePervyGuy chapter 17 . 3/5
Hi good luck with the rewrite
| arga101 chapter 17 . 1/8/2019
Aww. Realy wished to see Saren die. Nevertheless, good luck on the rewrite!
| GamerFicsPls chapter 2 . 9/4/2017
| GamerFicsPls chapter 1 . 9/3/2017
| IMDSTiNe47 chapter 17 . 8/27/2017
I agree with your reasons and decision.
This was an interesting concept with some fun moments of crossover/genre-blending craziness, but it lacked depth and momentum.
Hopefully, your group project can continue successfully with a clearer vision and fewer untimely interruptions. Good luck!
P.S. I actually liked the introductory timeline. Was a good nod to ME, set the tone and pacing well, and quickly established the setting. Maybe it's not what you're going for, but I'd be happy to see it return.
| Regrettable Pun chapter 17 . 8/21/2017
Well I wish I had looked at the chapter listong first because I just reread this entire story to end up with a note saying the story has been cancelled and rewritten. But I do have to say I agree. I always felt that this story had strong elements of being good but certain aspects (such as Kallen and Lelouches relationship) really needed work. So I'm glad to see that you guys haven't given up on it and are in fact improving it.
| Refraction of Light chapter 16 . 8/5/2017
Well, damn. I doubt you'd kill off Kallen so I'm guessing that the reaper nanomachines temporarily take over and cause mass chaos? If she dies I don't think there'll be much keeping Lelouche from the deep end, so that could be interesting too. I do hope that the three of you continue this story.
| The Jingo chapter 15 . 6/20/2017
Ahh, I had a thought but already left a review on the last chapter so I had to come drop it here.
Is there any way we can get some Male!Shep/Lelouch scenes? I don't mean in the yaoi pairing way, but like - John was this little shit disturber that learned the truth and did a 180 to become a true blue patriot. He took a level in badass and I'm almost expecting him to shout ALL HAIL BRITANNIA and CERBERUS IS HUMANITY.
It reminds me in a very tangential way of Gottwald. So having them meet and converse (especially for the first time) could really get the blood pumping as far as Shep's inner feelings and loyalty to the empire goes. Sometimes as a reader you just want to get to see things from the point of view of the commoner looking up at imperial majesty.
| The Jingo chapter 16 . 6/17/2017
This is totally top tier. A perfect blend of canons that doesn't feel like you just transplanted a few people from one to the other.
| FlackAttack chapter 16 . 3/18/2017
So what's going on here? Are you guys still working together on this or not? I would love to see more of this series or even just an update on your progress.
| Winged Serpent of Light - BOTM chapter 16 . 2/22/2017
| Jamonkey32 chapter 8 . 11/14/2016
please continue with this story, i love it
| TheOnlyKing chapter 6 . 10/14/2016
I can't read after chapter 7. Lelouch never fuckin BLUSHED even in canon so the fact that he did here is ridiculous.
| Mango eater 24 chapter 16 . 10/10/2016
| Dragonheart Of Ireland chapter 16 . 10/8/2016
This story is amazing! please update soon!