Great story!

ok, I might go further but this hurts to read. Hannah's character is a fucking mess, the dialogue is horrid, and Luna is quite annoying. Harry is annoyingly static, and the author is trying really hard to make this 'realistic', and not doing it very well.

to be fair, the balloon sword bit with Luna was great, and there is some good humor sprinkled in here and there, but I really don't know if I'm gonna finish this.

Lakshmi is so much fun in this chapter. :-)

It's so Damn lame that you finally put in a smut ace ad Harry isn't fucking in it. WTF is the point of this harem if he's getting no action while the girls hook up with each other? Worst chapter in the story by far.

I wanna laugh my was off cuz Pansy inadvertently quoting Aladdin was hilarious.

to be honest, i believe Harry would hate this version of Luna. he hates manipulation, and this Luna is worse than any version of Dumbledore I have ever read.

just found this again after almost a decade. I'm super excited to read this again. It has been long enough that I don't remember what happens in the story, just that I loved it!

Didn’t find this story til after it was finished. Loved every chapter of it. So happy to have read this. Seeing the interactions between all the girls as they drew closer to each other, in addition to Harry.
A harem where everyone cares for, and loves one another, as opposed to all just being Harry’s mates, is a beautiful thing.

Loved the story.
Despite needing 2 attempts to read through it it turned out to be awesome.. It is however a tad unrealistic. But it in itself works really well and is consistent.
Hope to read more awesome stories of yours

Good or Awful chapter
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bad chapter

I suppose he find a way to multiply himself in order to satisfy his wives, there is no way in hell he could do that as one man. But he did father all his kids when the real one get on with the wife. Also he have all the memories.

All the wives helped creating the charm.

I imagine your definition of casually dating at their age not include sex, because it really complicate the issue. That type of casually dating is better when adults even if it is only nominal adults of 17 here in the magical or 18 in the regular world or when they finished high school equivalent.

A nice light entertaining story, at least to start with, however, it devolves towards the end and becomes very cringy. Your Gabby is way too far into Mary Sue territory to the point that she seems utterly impossible and way out of character. The whole Hannah Abbott is fat situation smells of virtue signaling. On the whole the first part is fun and very entertaining, the comedy is pretty good and the characters are fun, the last part of the story reads like a self insert story written by a 14 year old girl with self esteem and body image issues who wishes she was a badass.

A MUST READ, Seer Luna, AU!