|Reviews for Aftermath: Part I|
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/1
Almost 5 in the morning my time should be sleeping, but I can’t stop reading...love this
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/1
This story is beautiful... wiping tears away as I’m reading, for your first time writing? It’s just pulls you in... loved Joel singing to Ellie...
| Guest chapter 15 . 11/27/2020
This was absolutely incredible, a work of art from start to finish. Wonderful work, every bit of it was perfectly done.
| MissIndieHippie chapter 7 . 10/29/2019
JOE MAMA IS JOE! no forreals tho, this story is super good so far, the writing is excellent, super detailed. I love the way you are slowly developing Ellie and Joel’s relationship, even though their coming-together as father and daughter has pretty much been sealed.
| Carl Solo chapter 15 . 2/26/2019
Wow this was a great story. I been reading some stories of TLOU since I finish the game and I can say that this is a good one. You write the character well, and stick at the game reference. Good job. I don't even know how I no read this before, because I check all the pages and try to pick the good one. So even that this was writing in 2013, I'm glad that I found it and read it. Now I'm eager to read the other 2 parts.
I also want to add that even that you don't like Ellie/Joel paring, some people do and that is nothing wrong with that, because all this is fantasy. Joel and Ellie are just fiction character, but they are so lovely together that some people like them that way. Anyway thanks for the story was really great.
| Stinger chapter 1 . 3/13/2018
I read all of your Aftermath stories about a year ago I think. I just accidentally found my way back due to an old thread on reddit. Your stories are fantastic.
| James Kev chapter 15 . 11/12/2017
Your writing is truly authentic! I love the way you communicated the bond and hardships between Joel and Ellie. Also, while reading, I wondered how exactly you were going to end the story at a point where they find Salt Lake City. I figured that it would end with Ellie staring at that deer engraving and was shocked to find that I was right! Brilliant story! I can’t wait to read part 2.
| James Kev chapter 3 . 11/8/2017
Great! Loving this so far! I can’t wait to read more tomorrow! Joel and Ellie are so adorable!
| SabrinaLeeThings chapter 1 . 7/14/2017
I don't know how I just found this fic ~now~ ... but holy crap this is amazing.
| Lala Sharada chapter 15 . 7/12/2017
Wow, this was such a great story! I like this deeper look at what happened in between the Winter and Spring seasons, and I think you described Ellie's trauma and her dissociative way of coping very well. She's breaking down against her will, and becoming more withdrawn and silent, suffering through horrible nightmares, and she's dealing with PTSD-like flashbacks. The enormous weight of her experienced trauma, and the heavy burden she now carries because of it, is easily felt by the reader throughout the course of the entire story. You can truly feel/understand her agonizing pain and how her heart is bleeding over David's death, and I believe that is a testament to your well honed writing skills, my friend.
It was sad to see Ellie go through all this emotional pain, but still the story was exciting and light just when it needed to be. I really did enjoy it and I will happily move on to this stories sequel!
| A dood chapter 15 . 5/26/2017
Amazing work. I loved this fanfiction to bits.
| kawoosh chapter 15 . 12/8/2016
This was so good!
| BeautifulDusk chapter 11 . 11/15/2016
Well, I've been reading fanficton for at least 6-8 years now and that's the second time a fic has made me teary. That dream was beautiful. I'm actually grateful you wrote that because the whole TLoU thing is a giant mind fuck (let's replace a dead kid with the girl whose meant to be the cure for man kind but instead we'll kill everyone instead, jeez Joel) but that dream made it just that little bit better. I love how he's opening up to her too, I'm always curious about what he would've been like pre the world going to shit...
Man, I really hope you come back to the site one day and keep writing. You've got a gift brah
| BeautifulDusk chapter 10 . 11/15/2016
I love the progress made in Ellie slowly becoming more herself again, it's not bang hey presto she's better again!
I'm so in love with this fic, I can tell it's going to be one that I'll keep coming back to for years to come
| BeautifulDusk chapter 9 . 11/15/2016
Wow, this is beautiful. The characters could not be more on point!