Reviews for The Maelstrom and the Thundercloud General
genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
great job
Passby chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
Hey dude look at the queens blade manga hide and seek elina is not a bitch in the manga she is the main character and she has a cooler persona and is hotter if you need to make an elina one base it off hide and seek elina so it does not have to to ooc
F3mi chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
Interesting start.
I am loving this even though i know nothing about Queen's Blade.
I thought this was a one shot when i got close to the end.
sketchfan chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
how utterly deliciously smutty as always
fairy.tail's.storm.king chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
I think i like to see the queen from the 1st show be with naruto the girl with the eye
bankai777 chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
Thanks for the great story.I am sure that Naruto and Claudette will be great parents.
Pyromania101 chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
Excellent! Just excellent! Well, I'm off to read FD3, so bye!
DarkChild316 chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
WOW, I knew this was going to be good, but even I didn't think that my ideas would work so great in your story. I must say this might be your best Naruto/Queen's Blade installment yet. This really makes me anticipate your Naruto/Alleyne lemon especially since Alleyne is my favorite Queen's Blade character!