Reviews for Phantom Shadows on the Floor
Guest chapter 3 . 2/3
Great story! I hope you continue it! - Ronnie Jane
tsubaki410 chapter 3 . 3/9/2015
Interesting. Courfeyrac's character isn't really fleshed out as much as some of the others, so I'm not sure what to think of him and 'Ponine.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/28/2014
I liked it before I learned she was going to be nice to Cosette(bleh) xD
ChrissyR chapter 3 . 1/8/2014
Who does Eponine like?
Phoenixflames12 chapter 3 . 1/8/2014
You're back! I'd forgotten (not intentionally of course) how wonderful this story was! The interactions between the Amis and Marius as well as Eponine and Marius were brilliantly done and I loved how you brought in the 'he defied the existence of nothing, not even ghosts' (I'm paraphrasing horribly here) side to Combeferre's character- beautifully done Mon Ami! I also adore the innocence that you bring to Gavroche's character whilst not losing any of his spunk- wonderfully written and please, please, please, please keep going and update soon! Much love x
Anon chapter 2 . 9/10/2013
Actually enjonine isnt that unrealistic because eponine is exactly what enjolras is (was?) fighting for. He thought women were all airheads that couldn't think for himself, but Eponine being the awesome badass she is would be someone that could prove him not all women are like that. Although ill admit e/é doesnt quite work in your story bcuz i think they work best if the story took place before the revolution. I just dont think they work as great coming back from the dead. If anything, e/r bcuz "do you permit it" and yeah
annie chapter 2 . 9/10/2013
bless you for not making this enjonine, it really is overused. 3
I'm me andi rock chapter 2 . 9/10/2013
I suggest Éponine/Courfeyrac because its a realistic ship (they're both flirty, quick-witted and loyal) and a rare one! Besides, Enjonine is unrealistic mainly because Enjolras is not heterosexual... If anything, he's asexual and aromantic or homoromantic. (My fav ship is Enjolras/France. No one? No one?)
Anyywwwaayyyy great story! Hope you update soon!
It's really interesting and confusing... Why do they see them? Is it possibly the whole Harry Potter thing where you can only see them once you've seen someone you love die (in this case, JVJ)?
SPEAKING OF JVJ IT WOULD BE GREAT IF HE AND JAVERT MADE AN APPEARANCE BECAUSE JAVERT WOULD BE ALL GROSS AND PALE FROM DROWNING AND JVJ WOULD LOOK NORMAL COMPARED TO EVERYONE AND THEY WOULD BE REALLY JEALOUS . Okay that's it I swear
Elena3579 chapter 2 . 9/11/2013
Eponine is an important character and I think what is going on with her is immportant. And thank you SO much for not making this an Enjonine fic. Anyways, update as soon as you can, thanks bye! :-)
Phoenixflames12 chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
This is really, really good! I love the Amis' ghostly interactions (especially Enjolras and Grantaire debating who died last) and your characterisations of Marius' grief and Cosette's desire for him to accept the Amis fate is really well done! Beautiful writing Mon Ami! x
EbonieCourfeyrac chapter 2 . 7/31/2013
Very good- that cleared up a lot! I don't mind Enjonine, but it is very common, so I'd probably not do that. My new favourite pairing is Combeferre/Éponine, so I'd vote that! Really good, I'm enjoying your story :)
EbonieCourfeyrac chapter 2 . 7/30/2013
No, I think Cosette and Éponine's interaction was brilliant. There was the right amount of hesitancy then they opened up more. Very good. And I loved the last bit of explanation, certainly cleared up a lot of stuff! I can't see the poll on your profile... But seeing as I am a guest i couldn't vote anyway. So, my new favourite Éponine pairing is Éponine & Combeferre, so if you had that as a choice I'd say hat, but if not... Well I don't mind Enjonine, but it gets a bit old... Perhaps if you manage to get the poll up I can vote here using the choices.
Enjonine lover chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
This is magnificent honestly please continue and yes ENJONINE:)
abbyisawalker chapter 2 . 7/30/2013
Love this story! Such an interesting take!
patricia chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Enjonine
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