hes gonna die.

I need more of this

I NEED MOOOOORE!

Maybe they'll revive the show and add this story as an episode but with a few changes. Also, they might add leafos as a main character.

Why couldn't they do an episode like this in the tv show? I'd really like to see that happening on tv. P.S. why aren't you making any new chapters?

I wish that paulie preztail would stay as a sour and his friends would go on a quest to save him. P.S. will new chapters come soon?

I wish that paulie preztail could've stayed as a sour and his friends will go on a quest to save him.

You know, it would be better if Paulie preztail remained as a sour and his friend fergy and the other pinatas go on a quest to find a cure for Paulie.

This is an awesome fanfiction! Hope to see more updates of it soon! :D

Very interesting. I do wonder how our little friends will get out of this one. [HURRY, go to the Fudgehog Factory and grab a random Fudgehog!]
But, in all seriousness, this turned rather...oh my goodness! How ARE they going to get out of this one?
One little...nit pick, really, I have is that, I feel it is rather rushed. Like, all the sudden, CONFLICT! I mean, some stories are like that, there is nothing you can really do to prevent that. But that is just a nit pick of mine, a slight pet peeve.
But, to much lingering might cause troubles to. A drawn out story that seems to be going no where anytime soon might cause lost of interest. So, don't fall in that hole. ; Trust me, I did.

Good luck on the story, and I am sure to Follow for more.

Yay, Leafos made an appearance! :D That's cool, I wonder why she never was in the animated series to begin with... She IS seen in the intro, after all!

Hello! I don't normally read fics based off the animated series, but on your profile I saw you're a fellow Dutchie so I thought I'd check your story out anyway! :D
Even though I'm not really interested in Paulie's and Fergie's endeavors, I think you're a good writer. You have great description skills and man, your English is amazing too! (F yes I'm jealous!)
I'll stay tuned for your later chapters, I can't wait to see those references to the games! I'd love to see you write Dastardos or Seedos, hehe! Keep up the good work!