|Reviews for Future Imperfect|
| Agent Xero chapter 8 . 7/25/2004
wow...that was a rele great part of ur saga! I thought it was awesome when Wes went to the future!
can u help me:: how the hell do you get a chapter up on this thing? i cant figure it out! grr! i have a story written but i cant figure out how to get it on here! do u gotta type it as a word docu then upload it? HELP SOMEONE! thanks!
btw. ur story was still great..cant wait for the next couple of one to read! whoo-hoo!
| Psycho Tangerine chapter 8 . 5/15/2004
Good one. But I really felt sorry for Alex. He knew he was wrong to fall in love with Jen and did try to fix it by making sure she and Wes got together (at least that's how I understand it). If he was really an asshole, he would've done everything possible to keep her away from traveling to the past. Wes interfered with the future by informing him of his impending death. I wish Jen had berated him for that.
| kagemusha chapter 8 . 12/21/2002
Very nice. Gr8 job writing, I can barely believe that it only took you 3 months! Talk about a fast writer. Wow. Your work is always so good, makes me jealous in fact...Hope to see more of your work soon!
| LG chapter 8 . 11/21/2002
Okay, I cannot WAIT for the next book to start...
| Nom-de-Plume chapter 8 . 11/20/2002
WOWSA! This is awesome! Write/Post soon...tho, if its a good chapter...i have no objections to the wait. See you on the flip side...also known as the pages of fanfiction.
| Tevrah chapter 8 . 11/20/2002
That was good!
| cmar chapter 8 . 11/20/2002
A good ending, and lead-in to the next story. Looks like you're incorporating 'Reinforcements', which I wouldn't even attempt. I'm looking forward to see how that goes.
Thanks for a fine story.
| Dagmar Buse chapter 8 . 11/20/2002
Okay, so I miscounted. Get #5 started! Soon! Or else ...
*starts scribbling furiously on Christmas Wish List, to be submitted to Torture 'R' Us ...*
Uh, yeah, great job!
| Dagmar Buse chapter 7 . 11/18/2002
That's it, you're NOT going on vacation until you finish this. I am NOT going to be left hanging with this until Christmas, or worse.
Hmm. On the other hand, the next update WOULD make a nice Christmas present .. as would a new assortment of torture implements for the SI Chest ...
| cmar chapter 7 . 11/18/2002
An interesting explanation for Alex's rather strange behaviour in the series. Looking forward to the last part.
| Tevrah chapter 7 . 11/18/2002
Very cool! When is something mushy going to happen between Jen and Wes?
| Tevrah chapter 6 . 11/17/2002
Cool! What's gonna happen next?
| LG chapter 6 . 11/15/2002
Okay, now I'm really curious. WHAT is so bad it's got Alex this depressed? *waves chocolates*
| Dagmar lazy chapter 6 . 11/15/2002
Oooh, great stuff! Plots within plots within plots ...
Of course, you realize that now I can't let you go on vacation, can I? There's no way I'll be able to wait a month or so for the next update. So ...
*grabs Rach, wrestles her down* Somebody help me chain her to the keyboard?
| LG chapter 5 . 11/11/2002
More... Soon... Please... *holds up bag of chocolate bars* Do you accept bribes?