This is probably the last word you'd expect to hear describing him, but Colleoni is absolutely adorable. He's the cool old person you really want to hang out with

PLEASE! CUM BACK SOON!

I await patiently for your next update. It's such a good story and hope you finish it. I have read Bold Gestures and loved it. Thank you for your stories.

I hate your freakjg ability to suck me into a story so completely. Do you know what you've put me through? I'm sneaking around trying to fly through this story! I love your Mob stories Bi don't think there are enough of them in the world. I have a ridiculous fascination.

So far this story has made me cry, laugh and somewhat mad that you keep making Bella fuck stuff up or just plan dumb. But I LOVE this Edward. And please more baby stuff...god I hope she starts acting like an adult for the baby.

so good!

Don't know if I care for Alice. Her "talk" with Bella about Jake really bugged me and her whiny ass about Bella going swimming is annoying. Feels more like a friend who is trying to get close to jasper via his sister. Emmett, what a douche! Wtf was all the talk about him being mad at Jake and then basically calling Bella a ho? Maybe Bella's first step to healing is to find new friends!

Huh, that was interesting. Walk of shame, lol

awesome writing!

I wish I had a fiercely protective brother who reacted like that when I found out I was pregnant in February this year... Jasper's hearts in the right place

Umm wow! Loving this! Big bro Jazz to the rescue! Hot damn

Just jumped on this bandwagon and it's my first review -sorry abit slack- but just had to say WOW and I'll be back but the suspense about jasper is killing me!

Xx

Ugh. Why did lizzie have to come n bring drama. Now Bella has to lie to Edward. Cant believe Mr. C still holds a torch for . Im getting worried for my favorite couple. Update please so I could c how all this will plays out.

So sweeeeeet!

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