|Reviews for Exits, Entrances, Curtain Calls|
| seareader chapter 1 . 1/31
Knowing what we now know about Jerkson, these are now my head canon. Except the Flynn bits but they do make a lot of sense...
| J-to-the-Essica chapter 1 . 1/18
Wow. This was so, so perfect. Heartbreaking, but realistic.
| murphycat chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
This is so accurate for emotional abuse and the life of an alcoholic/addiction junkie. No wonder she' s hard and tough. It is a testament to her character that she has remained loving.
| Laura Mayfair chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
These "snapshots" convey so much. It's almost like reading poetry. Heartbreaking and realistic.
| TheHamsterInMyMind chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
I remember thinking about how evocatively painful and heartbreaking and realistic it was when I first read the first few of these snippets on tumblr, and you've continued to amaze and... ouch. But this is so sadly and painfully, unapologetically honest about how bad (speculatively of course) such relationships can become for the person, without warning or notice.
I will be curious to see where they go from here. :)
| Ellie 5192 chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
I was fillowing these on tumblr, and I'm so glad you posted them here- to read them in one hit is very emotional. Simple yet effective little plot points that paint a very vivid picture. Well done.
| SharonFan1986 chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Oh that was Great.
| Megan429 chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Wow! This paints a hauntingly dark reality that was Sharon's life with Jackson. Andy was right, she deserved so much better.
| Isolith chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
I love these small snippets and the heartwrenching insight they give. You write amazingly.
| enawaldstein chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
Well done, dark and kind of distressed. Well written, thank you.
| Ivy Kendall chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
This is really good. I can feel Sharon's pain as she accepts the realities of her situation. Beautiful job!
| ajaielle chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
This is basically perfect; I love the way you've handled their history. Sharon has really been hurt because of her relationship with Jackson, but she's been made stronger because of it, too, and I think you show that perfectly.
There're a few grammar issues in that I think some of the sentences are missing words and it makes them somewhat insensible.
Please update soon!
| OzzyJ chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
This was really good - and I liked the style you chose to write it in. You paint a hauntingly believable picture of what their marriage may have been like.
'nights when he poured her more wine that she'd wanted, the 1:00 AMs when she could tell he wouldn't stop asking and she bought a night's sleep with ten minutes' use of her body.'
A powerful line, indeed. One that I'd imagine many of us can relate to...