Reviews for Breaking Beautiful by ohgeefantasy
LizziePaige chapter 1 . 3/3/2016
Just so sad what can happen to people when they have no support base to pull them through the tough times :(
SarcasticBimbo chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
Gut wrenching.
Rebadams7 chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Breathtakingly sad...
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Kickinl8tr chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Very good normally don't like non hea. But.. Since was a one shot didn't feel like I killed my self with a multichap heartbreak.
Robward17 chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
Well that Sucks that she died! And he's probably rotting in prison? Super Angsty...thanks for sharing this heartbreaker with us. Linda
beachcomberlc chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Sad story. Good luck!
Maplestyle chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
God this gutted me!
perpetually chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
Sad, tragic story. What a pity the way Bella's life turned out to be. Emotional story.
Karriek chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
Absolutely love this story, good luck with the contest.
Postapocalypticdepository chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
This was so tragic.
What started out as young love blooming turned into a series of events gone bad.
Through it all Edward never up loving Bella.
This was a powerful, poignant read.
roxiegirl chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
So so sad! This killed me! I'm reading too many without HEA's. I was really hoping for an HEA here. Darn it! But well done and good luck!
LaPumuckl chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
That was heavy stuff, but I'm glad you killed James for what he did...
alisapay1 chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Wow, poor Edward and Bella - having to go thru so much in their young lives... Thanks for writing and good luck in the contest. Mwah!
miranda04 chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Its a good story. Sad, but not really angsty, though Imo.
Hadley Hemingway chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Very nice job - I really liked this Edward!
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