|Reviews for Behind the Veil, Beneath the Shroud|
| karin6824 chapter 6 . 12/9/2018
I've read this story I think twice before, but it's just so lovely and bittersweet that I had to read it again.
Thank you for sharing it!
| MariamJabeen chapter 6 . 12/3/2018
Okay so I love it and I HATE it. First of all, Haymitch. I need to know if Haymitch is alive or dead. And I just can't imagine Snow or anyone NOT catching on to this. I feel like the ending is incomplete because it's not really a resolution. I get that's what you're trying to do but I can't find it to be completely finished when Katniss is still a mentor, Haymitch it dead, Plutarch and Hercutio are doing god knows what, Snow somehow has not planted bugs in Hercutios home where Katniss spends most of her time, Hercutio has not come back to the Capitol for another alteration and the Everdeens and Hawthornes? There are SO. MANY. loose strings, I can't accept this as the end. I get that's what you were trying to do, make it a little bit cliffhangers, leave some things to the imagination but that's not what this is. You can make your ending a bit not ending like but this is just incomplete. Other than the ending, I had a few problems with Snow believing Katniss, then Peeta goes missing and he doesn't think to check with Katniss. Then, it's highly unlikely that Hercutios can maintain his cover. And what about Finnick and Johanna? There are a few strokes like this with no rebellion, but in it, there is NO rebellion and some have the rebellion eventually but you can't assume that Snow remains in power FOREVER.
| cheesebunsaremelting chapter 6 . 5/5/2016
and oh i forgot to add this on my comment but THIS STORY NEEDS A LOT MORE RECOGNITION!
| cheesebunsaremelting chapter 6 . 5/5/2016
This was breathtaking, amazing, incredible, magnificent, brilliant, exquisite story! You are truly talented to came into this plot. It was heart wrenching yet so beautiful! Katniss' and Peeta's characters were very true to the book. I feel like I am actually reading a suzanne collins everlark fanfiction of her own. This could even be the continuation for catching fire because this was so good! I wish there was more tho. I want to know if the rebellion ever happened or if Haymitch really died. Please, do another chapter or an epilogue or maybe even a one shot about what happened after bc this is making me insane.
| Fenris Jin chapter 6 . 6/16/2015
First paragraph clued me in. Oh Peeta. The lengths he would do. xD
This was a nice canon divergence. The only thing I regret are the loss of those curly blonde.. and wait a minute! His baby blues! Noo! The injustice! I hope Snow burns in hell for this. xD
I wish too that Haymitch found his way to District 13. I think he'd really be proud of his two tributes for they're trick against the Capitol. Finally, a ploy Everlark share while keeping their mentor in the dark. Can we request an outtake in this? xD
Good read! :)
| Fenris Jin chapter 5 . 6/16/2015
Peeta blowing kisses over the camera! Can't say I'd blame the fangirls for wetting themselves over it.. xD
I'm happy over Katniss' progress too. She's finally appreciating things. :)
| Fenris Jin chapter 4 . 6/16/2015
Hah. I think it's not right for me to gloat over the fact that Snow actually likes Peeta... But here I am, proud and giddy over the fact. xD
| Fenris Jin chapter 3 . 6/16/2015
A cliffie huh? Maybe the plan won't work after all? Aww.. But I sort of wanted them to be separated for a while.. xD
I love the feels between Everlark. xD
| Fenris Jin chapter 2 . 6/16/2015
Damn. I pretty excited for the upcoming separation? Is that too cruel? xD
I'm kind of giddy over the fact that Peeta and Johanna are actually buddies.. xD
| Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
This is a pretty interesting concept.
Peeta knows how to play the Games, however that doesn't translate to him being willing to play it if it changes him. That is quite a sentiment you kept intact.
It would have been interesting if he mentored for real.
| hilster72 chapter 6 . 1/11/2015
That was great. The characterisations were spot on as was the core of steel that runs through Katniss. A unique take on THG. Kudos.
| hilster72 chapter 1 . 1/10/2015
Unique. I've never read, or thought of, that 'solution'...very inventive & interesting, can't wait to see where this goes.
| feelingshortofstable chapter 6 . 1/9/2015
That was awesome and insightful and unlike any other fanfiction that I have read. I definitely think you captured their personalities and loyalties very well in the actions you laid out for them. It almost feels like an alternate route of the series. Very well done.
| NotMyBabies chapter 6 . 1/8/2015
Hot damn! Very interesting and well thought out.
| Amanthya chapter 6 . 10/30/2014
I actually really like this. It could happen. And they were true to themselves. And they *won*. I loved that. It more than makes up for the fact that they are not physically recognizable as Peeta and Katniss.
Usually I don't like physical alterations - such as Naruto suddenly, and pointlessly, gaining fox ears and tail. But this wasn't pointless, it was purposeful, and thought-out, and for Katniss even agonized over a little. It was real, and for both of them, worth it.
Also, spot-on with Gale's reaction. He was so betrayed by Katniss's pretending to be in love with Peeta even when he, Gale, knew why they were doing it - he still held a grudge against Peeta and blamed Katniss. So yes, I can definitely see him being distant with her here.