|Reviews for Tome of Origins|
| Legend of Derpy chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
I like how in character everyone seems in your story. The plot line seems to flow well, and the bit about Zecora being protector of the forest is interesting. However, your story is hard to read, not because of the way you have written it, but because of your spacing. The sentences are so close together with no spacing between them, which makes it bit of an eyestrain. I suggest using more spacing, for the sake of your readers.
Other than that, best of luck!
| Cyev chapter 1 . 7/28/2013