|Reviews for Throes of Passion|
| Spidey2 chapter 12 . 4/15
HOTT story! Keep going!
| Veigns chapter 12 . 3/26
Just finished reading the story, I like the idea and everything, it's a harem done right, smit with a story haha, however there was a few small details written in that were completely overy looked, for example, the girls don't wear panties unless they are on their period, Ino, had her's on chapter 11. So it gave a bad image lol, other then that, I enjoyed reading the story.
| lray chapter 5 . 3/3
Good making her break. Next time torture her
| leray chapter 4 . 3/3
Does she have a nurvous habit of hitting her lip or something
| leray chapter 3 . 3/3
Good he learns how not to be a dick
| leray chapter 2 . 3/3
Kyubi is soooooooooooo funny and peverted
I love it
| leray chapter 1 . 3/3
Good but he is kind of overconfident dick and I hate that but good story nonetheless
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/1
Sadly, this is not the most perverted fanfiction I've ever read. Even out of ones this long, it still doesn't even come close. Might be the most perverted one that doesn't involve Naruto banging his or his friend's mothers. If not, it's close.
The lemon quality is only a 6.5/10 on average (there were some pretty good ones..)
Lemon quantity is 10/10 however. There were so many damn lemons that even a self proclaimed citrus fiend such as myself got more then my fill. couldn't have done better.
The "story" is horrible, but still better then that of 85% of all perverted fanfictions, so 7.5/10
The length, at 50,000 words, is an 8.5/10. 80-100,000 is perfect, but due to the lack of fanfictions living up to that, you get a higher score.
32.5/40 or 81% overall. B-, You should be proud.
May the Porn be with you, amen.
| ItJusFanfiction chapter 12 . 2/27
You forgot about Tsunade and Hiruzen. But loved the story.
| Silber D. Wolf chapter 12 . 2/27
| nahte123456 chapter 12 . 2/23
Ummm, maybe I missed it, but what happened to Hiruzen?
| paul.kight.79 chapter 1 . 2/3
is this after he saves the ninja world?
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/23
fuck you im out of here you fuck destroy everything you get your paws on
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/19
Put tayuya in this
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/18