|Reviews for Something Wicked|
| ReflectiveReader chapter 5 . 6/1/2020
The bolded parts at the end really adds something to the story.
| Shadow2550 chapter 20 . 3/14/2019
I really loved this story though I do have a few nitpicks and questions.
First off, why couldn't the ghosts just have Danny give them some of his blood ahead of time? It makes more sense to me that Danny would just stay to protect his home, give the ghosts a few vials of his blood that he could easily draw ahead of time, and help Ghostwriter with the final sigils than fly across town if he doesn't need to. I'm going to assume that the spell required Danny to be present at all the sigils not just the last one or that Danny was just too clueless to think of this.
Second, while I'm not completely caught up on my Supernatural lore, still working my way through season 8, I have watched all 3 seasons of Danny Phantom. In Season 3 episode 7 the GIW try to blow up the Ghost Zone (GZ) while Danny tries to stop them, because if the GIW destroys the GZ the human world will go with it. I know that the Danny in this story would try to save the GZ anyway because he's very attached to it but it still feels strange that this is never brought up as a motive for Danny to help the ghosts. Especially, because while most of Heaven might not care what happens to the human world Castiel and the Winchester's certainly do. It also feels weird that Danny never questions why 2 humans would help the angels destroy their world and would at least try to tell the Winchester's that if the GZ goes the human world goes with it. It also seems odd that Castiel wouldn't already know this. Though I suppose all of the above is possible but, it still seems really unlikely.
It's a bit hard to tell if I'm 100% right because the ending is a bit ambiguous. However, my personal theory is that the universe in this story has a heaven, a hell, a purgatory, a human world and a GZ. When the GZ is destroyed it causes a ripple effect that destabilizes and destroys the rest of this universe (it's heaven, hell, purgatory, and human world) as well. Danny somehow ends up in a different universe with the Darkness and Clockwork severs his connection to this universe before it dies so they're both ok. However, everyone else is dead. Sam, Tucker, the Winchesters, the angels, all the ghosts, Jazz, and Maddie are of this universe are completely gone. All wiped out because because the Winchesters and the Angels were too intolerant and short-sighted to see that the GZ's existence was necessary to their own.
| Anna McNarin chapter 20 . 1/7/2019
I never did finish watching Supernatural, got bored around season eight. I'll have to reread all this when it's not almost 4am. Lol I dig it anyway.
| Nirankush chapter 9 . 10/8/2018
While well written, this story should be classified as a tragedy. It quite honestly made me cry.
| ninjacatblue chapter 20 . 6/29/2018
This was quite the story. Theres something obout your writing that just made the whole thing so eerie and actually put me on edge at some parts. The ending was a mite unclear, but most of the story had the same vibe so it works. I just love how you had so much going on in the background and conveyed so much of it in the end of chapter texts. Also how you really just stuck with Dannys pov even when he was oblivious or important things were happening else where. Seriously, loved how you did that!
| dingo027 chapter 4 . 4/7/2018
I have watched only two or tree episodes of Supernatural in my life some years ago, now I discovered THIS. I was worried I could not catch on what is going around, but I understand what is going around. If someone have simillar problems. READ IT or follow (Follow - Dingo's fanfic library:)). It IS WORTH IT 3
| DescendingSnow chapter 20 . 8/30/2017
I don't know shite about Supernatural but this was amazing. The ending. It was the best ending I've ever read. I was wondering what ZeroXYami meant by beautifully devastating but now I know. Hoooly moly, this was a damned great freaking read. Especially Darkness managing to save Danny from the crumbling timeline (did I get that right?) I'm a bit confused. A bit but still, I hope for a continuation.
| Devious Purrloin chapter 20 . 8/10/2017
Are you going to start the sequel?
| Athena128 chapter 20 . 6/10/2017
This story was so good! I just bingeread the whole thing. I so hope you make a sequel to this!
| ZeroXYami chapter 20 . 4/27/2017
...I'm kind of just speechless. I wasn't expecting an ending like that. Seriously, it was so beautifully devastating that I can even put it into words... I think I'll just sulk in denial for a bit, I haven't read a tragedy in a long while...
| Eon chapter 5 . 4/15/2017
Hey, just wanna say, this is really well written, but for some damn reason I can't read farther then this. I feel like it's just not really keeping me. It pulled me in quickly, and damn was the destination of Vlad Plasmius emotionally stirring. I just can't really get into the pacing or maybe this story isn't quite my cup a tea. Either way, I wanna remind yah, I may stop reading, but this is still a wonderfuly written piece. [As far as I've read] and I'm bound to check out your other work now~
| JustInquisitive chapter 20 . 12/28/2016
I feel like maybe deep down Danny only needed someone to understand them, and while Tucker was his best friend, and Jazz was always helping when she could, it still wasn't enough, Tucker didn't understand everything about Ghosts, and Jazz only scratched the surface, Sam clearly didn't understand if she had ended up trying to be the brave one, his parent's didn't understand, neither did Sam, or Dean, he was all alone.
Then he meets Darkness, who's like on old friend he never met, and it's perfect, because he finally has someone who understands the darkness deep inside someone.
This story was a complete masterpiece, I loved every second of it, you are an inspiration, so I thank you.
I would love a sequel, because this one was amazing, and I just CRAVE to know what happens next, though there's one thing I'd prefer for the next fic.
Could there be less cursing? I'm not all that comfortable with it.
Number two, I got some questions.
1. Are Sam, and Danny ever gonna make up, even if they never get back together again?
2. Is Danny gonna be evil? (plz no!)
3. Will Danny become friends with Dean, and Sam? (I hope so!)
4. Will Darkness join Danny? (I'd like to see that!)
Anyways again, love the fic, you're awesome!
| aDragonqc chapter 1 . 11/15/2016
In the show, DP, they do show how desiree and poindexter died only a few were probably never actually alive, such as Clockwork, Pariah, Pandorah, and Frostbite. I'm going on a wild guess that Aragon's kingdom all died during the black plague or somthing, like hos Dora always said "I want to go to the ball", and the pharoh guy, they explained how he died along with all the pharohs servents, which is very acurate to history. But they have told the storys on how many ghosts gave died.
| tyry95 chapter 1 . 11/3/2016
Every once in a while you come across a great story in the most unexpected places. This is definitely one of those 1 in a 100 stories!
| Heroofthe13thDay chapter 20 . 10/6/2016
Woah, this fic was a rollercoaster. I didn't even know who I wanted to come out victorious. So many things unanswered! What did Sam say to Danny to make him angry? How did Maddie and the Winchesters meet? Is this the end of the world or what? Man, you should write an episode of Supernatural and it would be sort of like Steven Moffat meets Carry On My Wayward Son.